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Aak Daar Dovah, Fent Zu'u? Niid. Ch. 16
🕑 Added 2025-11-04 11:10:34 +0000 UTCIt's another big boy! Which may explain partially why it took so long. Decent chapter and a half. Hopefully none of you are feeling the waiting pains too harshly.
Lot happening in this one. A few major plot points being ironed out and the nature of the next arc coming to light. Not the arc people necessarily suspected, I'm going to guess, but what is a medieval story without a good tourney, eh? Heheh.
As always, thank you all very much for being here. I hope you enjoy.
Use the link if you want to comment or point out mistakes. This will be quite fresh and potentially have them until I've gone back through.
Otherwise, if it suits you more, you may always use the PDF. I recommend if you're reading on a computer in the link instead of PDF though, you get one of those apps that turns google docs into a dark mode. Fucking bizarre that there's only third party apps that do that, despite google docs clearly having a dark mode option for mobile that's built in.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZvmWjqxV6PrteJitl_qObx3EUXK7psE3G2ZTkJTskTs/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Procrastination
Ysmir doesn't have a glass candle. That mage shot him across a football field and then ran away(wisely). :D
Ioannes Parvus
So just as Ysmir enters KL with a glass candle, the Alchemists and Rhaena start searching for one. Interesting to see where that will go. I agree though we need to see a good Fus Ro Dah at some point.
Luminant
Loved when he offered to prove his nobility by completing an impossible task. The Nirnian ideal of nobility is so far off from the Westerosi ideal of nobility that they didn't even really comprehend what he was offering at all. You wasted your one free Demigod favor, Alysanne ๐
