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Skybound - Chapter 21: YEET

🕑 Added 2020-11-26 08:03:07 +0000 UTC

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Adam Bell

Yeet.

Andrew Denton

Ah, fathers.

Jørgen

That last part made me smile and all most brough out a laugh, thanks for that. I almost wish I could jump forward in time to grab the books and stories I'm waiting for to be completed.. This is one of them so please let the words flow Thank you so much for this strange wonderful world that has inspired a world or two in my own stories. Thank you so very much <3

Andrew Haynes

I have tears of laughter in my eyes. That was great.

Great chapter, thx. Small error -> "It took took out one of the lift rings"

Maximilien Muys-Vasovic

Yeet.

Mr Damage

Dad jokes FTW :)

Yeet

Carl Mason

I like the chapter, it is good. Highly enjoyable. Though I would not have thought her dad would be one to use "yeet". It does provide a suitably humorous distraction from the homicidally blind faith he has in his daughter's observably low level of skill at exactly what she needs to do to survive this.

Pyro Hawk

That ending had me seriously laughing. And picturing Moghren's face even more so. Seeign as I can't help but believe she in no way anticipated anything like that happening.

j0ntsa

Good lord, that made me laugh

a_man_in_black

A bit short, but the last half of this one got re-written multiple times. originally Dana was going to get a POV in this chapter, and the skyship was going to crash, causing an explosion that morgan could see from first raven's roost. that got ditched for having a conversation via mana-radio, but in that version morgan had only been awake for a day after getting her wings, and that was not enough time to get the skyship to the silent city. this still feels sorta rushed, and will probably get heavy revision.


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