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OC Piece: "The Slippery Slope"
🕑 Added 2022-12-10 19:20:39 +0000 UTCThanks for your patience, guys--here's that bimbo piece I kept promising on Twitter.
Less of an OC piece than a POV piece, really. It's written in 2nd person with a few flashbacks throughout, exploring the narrator's delight at the transformation of his once-buttoned-up girlfriend into a fat, greedy, brainwashed stoner bimbo queen. You know, the normal relationship pipeline.
Enjoy!
Comments
Adam
I'm voting for a sequel as well.
Zaftig Industries
Ahh, thanks! I was literally just posting about how I don't get feedback on these short pieces and blammo, here we are, feedback. Yeah, I'd love to do more of these. I think having a very, very loose "OC universe" is a fun idea--nothing massive like Writing.com's Buttercombe, but a loose network of recurring characters, in both standard modern and modern-fantasy settings. Keeping it casual makes it easier for me to churn out more like these.
Thiscantbereal
This was great! Felt like it's prime for a sequel where we see her fatter and dumber.
