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Short Story: "A Self-Made Woman"
🕑 Added 2023-02-25 15:12:50 +0000 UTCJust a small piece while I work on the finish to the Mass Effect series, and map out something new: a corruption piece based on James Cameron's Avatar. That's right, we're going back to Pandora, and this time, we're bringing even more burgers.
In the meantime, enjoy this sordid tale of a feedee who has decided to gain solo and is enjoying the flabby, sweaty results of her efforts. Written in second-person for immersion and surreal flavor purposes.
Feel free to hit me up with feedback on these short pieces, I'm not sure if they're really hitting for patrons because I haven't gotten any commentary or DMs on them. Always open to switching things up if you guys want.
Comments
Zaftig Industries
Thank you!! I really appreciate the feedback, I wasn't sure if I got the concept across or not.
Julian Knight
Not usually one to comment but absolutely loved this story~ The second person intox hits just right, and the body description is gorgeous as always!
