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PftA Book 5 - Epilogue

🕑 Added 2025-11-05 22:55:34 +0000 UTC

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K L

Thank you for the book! Looking forward to exploring the new world. I will say though there were a few things I’d love to have seen before moving on. We didn’t get to see what happened with the brother (you’d mentioned having a plan for his death which I thought meant we’d see his reincarnation at some point but the epilogue would have been a great spot for that). I’d also love to have heard more about the public reception to the changes to the system and to the new dungeon plus her post-ascension interview. Even a passing mention of it from Amie’s perspective would have been great added in to her talking about what happened with the other dungeon administrator.

Procrastination

I added a bit more to book 4 to include Amie. I’ll probably do the same for book 5 when I start editing.

Thomas Heaton

Nice! I really liked this epilogue! One bit of feedback I have that this puts in to perspective for me at least, that aside from near the beginning, and then here, I feel like we didn't see as much of Amie as we could have. I know Emie was busy going from one fire to the other, but I think this relationship could maybe be developed a little more before the epilogue. Could just be me though, I don't always read the edits, maybe it's been fleshed out more


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