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The Big Tits Club: Chapter 42

🕑 Added 2021-06-04 15:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Bluedragonauthor

Thanks for the feedback! So I've got Mari/Matty (or maybe Matty/Belle) having a conversation about the Mari-incident in Ch 40 and some more from Zofi about why she skipped her week. Will keep these in mind during editing. Thanks for being patient with my rough drafts!

Firefly

I really like the addition/return of Holly, great idea and great timing. The dynamic with Belle in particular is intriguing. However, I don't fully understand Zofi's motivation to skip her week just like that. Sure, she's clearly not romantically interested in Matty, but so far she definitely enjoyed the girlfriend experience (the movie-themed date and holding hands at school come to mind). Alice already demonstrated that the week doesn't necessarily need to have deeper meaning. I'm not saying Zofi's behaviour doesn't make sense, there are valid possible explanations, but I'm surprised Matty just accepts this without actually talking to her. He could have at least brought it up at some point during the week and tried to better understand her reasoning. I guess this all comes back to the fact that is actually put into words in this chapter: The girls make all the decisions, usually without talking to Matty at all, and he is just reacting to the constant surprises. This annoys both him and the reader to some degree, and it was refreshing to see him take initiative for once to end the sex boycott.


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