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BTC2: Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2023-01-19 16:01:02 +0000 UTC

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That stray beam of sunlight has it out for Matty. He can't throw that thing off his trail for nothin.

Loneshot

I agree with Ave_Joe, there are definitely some burning questions having to do with the fate of Kai. It looks like there might the opportunity for Matt to do some growing up. He seems to be on the verge of realizing how empty casual sex is without the love and affection he shares with his girlfriends. Now if only the girls would get on the bandwagon. On a more technical note, I’m not a fan of flashbacks without a real purpose. I feel that a flashback should traverse a significant amount of time (years) and deal with matters of deep significance to the story/characters. For instance, the first time someone met the love of their life, the moment a love broke someone’s heart, or other life-altering event.

Ave_Joe

So, what’s the story on Eve’s former boyfriend? Injured? In the military? Married to one he doesn’t love? Gay? (Not that there’s anything wrong with that.