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BTC2: Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2022-09-20 15:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Ron Johnson

Drama _requires_ some hazard for the protagonist to overcome or survive. Otherwise... *BORING*!

R.J. Miller

I have to agree with Joe here... it really does seem that Belle is trying to bulldoze her way into creating 2.0 before Matt is ready. There is a reason why Belle is BY FAR my least favorite of the BTC girls...

Ave_Joe

Sorry, Belle needs a sit down. She’s talking too much and trying to setup a “2.0” that Matt did not agree to. She’s going to mess things up, to affecting her relationship with everyone.

Wookey

I love this story. The tightness of your writing seems to glue much better with these characters


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