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BTC2: Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2022-11-23 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Ave_Joe

Glad to see Eva didn’t jam up the team at this time, but I can see hell breaking loose the next time she shows up. It won’t be right away, it will be a slow boil.

R.J. Miller

Okay... a few observations... 1. I'm liking Lily a bit more after this chapter... she is starting to show a bit more of a unique personality other than just being "somewhat generic short-and-stacked Pacific Island hottie" who is Belle's BF. I got a bit of whiplash going from the "Eva situation" to Lily taking her virginity out back and having it shot with a 12-gauge, but I look forward to seeing her growth from here on... 2. Sam's response to Lily's use of the R-word explains that her and Naimh have not been made aware of that particular episode. This may need to be dealt with in the near future... if it hasn't already been swept under in upcoming chapters. 3. This is the most Sam I've seen in a while... hope it keeps coming. She is admittedly my favorite... 4. There were still a few brief moments of Matt's thoughts and desires being pushed to the side by some of the girls -- a old habit from the days of Safe Matty, I'm guessing -- but I'm glad to see that he's making the effort to avoid being steamrolled in the process.

Benjamin Davidson

Two down, one to go. 👍


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