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BTC2: Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2023-04-22 15:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Ron Johnson

"My parents certainly want me sleeping under their roof for a while. Same with Sam and Belle." Why isn't Matt spending the whole break at Mr Kramer's house? His "real" father's house.

Uppercase

Where's the fun in relationship discussion that go on for more than a paragraph, half of which is the two parties arguing about the meaning of terms or defining a peripheral status or situation? Where is the fun of pretending that someone is never going to sleep with someone else when that is the only reason they are in the story?

Bluedragonauthor

"It would be nice for just one extremely attractive woman to be introduced in these stories who is not destined for the narrator's bed, or for a BDA protagonist to NOT get into the pants of a woman to whom he is this attracted." Where's the fun in that?

Uppercase

Rooting for Skylar and Mr Kramer. Warily suspicious that Matty's mom is already schtupping him in secret so the idea of the two of them becoming ACTUAL big brother & little sister, no matter how little sense that makes vis a vis her moving away (would not mind them having a threeway, because why should the rules of monogamy only be suspended for Our Hero?). It would be nice for just one extremely attractive woman to be introduced in these stories who is not destined for the narrator's bed, or for a BDA protagonist to NOT get into the pants of a woman to whom he is this attracted.

Wookey

Hard to believe no comments A great set up chapter So many options. Will Skylar and Matty have Christmas with Belle and Dr K. Will Belle encourage her Dad and Skylar to start something? How will Skylar fit in with the Eva arc? My hope is that Eva's continued growth is not drowned out with the focus is on Skylar.


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