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BTC2: Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2023-05-20 15:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Mark smith

I agree the should all end up together in one way or another I can totally see it happening someway or another I would love to see sam, belle, neevie, Mari and skylar be the main girls while the others live close by but love to get in on the action in the "main house" they should all realize they can all be happy together rather than separately, also I believe the story needs to be delivered a little faster meaning having time skips and honestly not involve so many different girls, would also love to see Matty get it on with his mother if that would be an option that would be hot

Loneshot

The best part of this chapter was seeing Matt’s character growth when dealing with Sam. It’s good to see him coming to grips with the idea that he can’t remain “Safe Matty” and only do things to make the women happy. He has to be an engaged partner with his own part to play. I’m not going to read too much into Holly saying she’s breaking up with Matt. From the get go, Holly has always been a free spirit who wouldn’t completely commit to the BTC. She’s never been confident in her place in Matt’s life on her own mind. It’s already been said that she only considers herself his girlfriend when she’s with him. I’m thinking this is an attempt to distance herself even more from Matt before she gets hurt any more than she already is. Of course, another option is that Holly and Matt will talk about whatever is bothering her and things will stay the same. I’m still holding out hope that the ladies will realize that it’s not just about who gets Matt in the end, but the fact that they’re happiest and most fulfilled when they are all together.

Bluedragonauthor

Stay tuned...

Mark smith

I hope to see Mari be a priority at some point I do honestly believe he can love multiple women at once and hopefully the girls decide that at some point they all realize that while yes they may not have that one on one love they crave, Matty is above and beyond the best man for them individually, I hope Matty stops being so passive and instead tells Mari that he truly does love her and wants her forever, I honestly believe she would be like the mother of the group and please author stop bringing up gerald every now and then making the reader feel as if there is something there for Mari, just make Matty be aggresive in claiming his love for his angel

Wookey

Am sorry but not one of BTC's better chapters. Having finished previous chapter with a Beverley-Ben cliffhanger the follow on explanation was underwhelming. So much could have been said or stout into perspective. Maybe others have a different view. After two excellent previous chapters , this chapter felt a bit like a "generic brand" equivalent of the good stuff we had been becoming used to reading. Hopefully both I am in the minority AND next chapter sees a return to previous high standards.

Ave_Joe

Looks like the start of the dismantling of the BTC. At some point the ladies will become tired of not being the number one in his heart. Matt may love them all, but he’s not really “in love”, with any of them. He’s already said he doesn’t want to get married, so he’s not in love with anyone. It will be interesting who will be left standing near the end.


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