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Chapter 23 - Revelations

🕑 Added 2025-04-11 23:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Some insightful crystal ball work right there - but I'm glad you liked the chapter. I have to agree about Walden being slippery. I often imagine it as cold sweat.

Marco

What a scorching hot chapter! I have to admit that the Evie/Kevin storyline is probably my favorite, or at least tied with Rachel/Joe. Like Bareslut mentioned, perhaps Evie and Kevin should have been punished for going behind Richmond's back. Evie would probably like any punishment, though; she is definitely enthralled by Richmond. I remember Kevin having to make "amends" to Richmond alone in his office in a previous series (Hotwife Trainer?). Imagine how mortified Kevin would be if he had to submit to Richmond in front of Joe! As for Evie moving forward, I wonder if she is eventually going to take over the Zaria role. At the very least, she seems like the one who Richmond will use if he needs to close a deal or help convince a lukewarm hotwife. For Kevin, I can see Richmond using him to help convince some of the more reluctant husbands to submit on their knees. There seems to be a lot that will not take that final step with Richmond. I am sure Richmond is going to put Walden in his place, but maybe the best way to do it is to have Evie show up and basically announce her allegiance to Richmond. Walden is a slippery character; I am sure he will get over it.

Tinto

You're right about potentially more physical punishment for Kev and Evie, but Richmond is playing the long game and wants more from the pair of them. I'm glad you're enjoying some of the newer characters too. I agree, it would be great if they could foster a little of the 'bortherhood' element you mention.

Bareslut

A really enthralling episode. When I read an entire chapter with my cuck cock slowly growing as the heat in the story intensifies, I know this is a chapter I will read over and over again. I thought there should have been more physical punishment of evie and kev for their "deception" but that would have been hard to find space for that element with the psychological training and display objectification going on. Interesting how far kev has come with his cocksucking. He was so embarrassed and humiliated at first he never wanted anyone to know. Now he obediently drops to his knees with no complaints for ass to mouth service of his Dom in front of others. That rabbit hole journey of his is picking up speed! Really liking the development of Sandra and Rene. I find Tinto's development of his patreon cuck couples a thrilling dose of "reality" that fits well with the main fictional characters. Imaging my fellow Patreon readers as active participants allows for an insight into our community pysche and for me at least, solidifies a sort of emotional brotherhood we all share.


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