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The Art Problem

🕑 Added 2024-04-15 17:00:40 +0000 UTC
The Art Problem

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jpoh smith

wanted to say very glad the game development is ongoing and you keep pushing on and evolving regardless of the challenges. that is incredible to see. hats off to y'all for continuing to push forward and keep getting better and better.

chevy84

I Like the tweeked version!

Просто чел, или нет

I am so in love with the twiaked version. Its perfect

geebster

As a not-artsy person my self i wont make any specific critiques but I will say... Tweaked version is MUCH better. Like for my tastes thats perfect.

Footfan

Hello, I love the rework <3 she looks sweet and hot, if you can create mean looking faces and glares with the same style I think the problem you have been facing for so long is finally resolved, good job on you all for learning and reaching such a good level in just 2 months, thank you for the effort <3 we are looking forward to the updates.

Dekarous

Thanks for the detailed response! Btw Ruby has a reason she's "older" than the other Dominas and has wrinkles present, we've written some very detailed lore for her, but we're keeping it a secret until we actually drop her update lol

Seraphim2118

Love the rework personally. I think she would be good to go as is. In response to the previous critiques of her being sweet and cute I would say that reducing the saturation level of the blush would do alot to give her a more neutral or melancholic expression. Which would work fine if you want to make her feel more dominant than sadistic. Alternatively, tightening the lines around the mouth and or eyes will go a long way to making her appear more severe. And if you want to lean into the hard sadism angle, altering the angle of the head 2-5 degrees upward and or adding the hint of a smirk on the further side of her face would give the impression she is consistently looking down on you. Alternatively, choosing to keep or even deepen the blush paired with an alteration to the mouth to make her nibble on her bottom lip could send a powerful message of innate eroticism as if she were sizing up a new toy. Finally, if you are shooting to make her appear more mature physically than the other Dominas I think some light shading at the edges of the eyes and mouth to give the implications of developing crows feet would be more effective than returning actual wrinkles to her face given that the Dominas are intended to be timeless beauties. Adding features that could be seen as flaws to their material forms would not make much sense lorewise in my opinion. That being said these are all just suggestions and yall do what feels right for you. Thanks for all the effort and we look forward to Ruby's official debut!

M

This post says it well so I'll just reinforce it here. This is clearly an improvement to the point that I consider it effectively equal to the original Shakie artwork. This said, I definitely also prefer a stern expression.

david knox

Love the current one, however I have to agree with what's been said in the previous comments she needs to seem sadistic and I think the phrasing for her lines would work marvelous with more intense presence from her design.

dylan dark

Much bigger fan of the rework, read the other comments and I agree with her looking older than the others would be good. Not even remotely artistically inclined so not sure how to make that happen but despite all the speed bumps, I’ve been very content with these updates and the directions the team has been working towards!

Dekarous

Fair. We could definitely add the wrinkles back and make her a bit more authoritative (I think just a soft redesign of the brows could really help here)

Dekarous

Yes, we have that in our plans. Ideally we're going to re-design all AI work by hand when we have the timeframe, and also the faces of the first Xenssei's works (the multi-domme scenes for example)

AretarZ

I think the rework one is overall better than the previous design, but the only problem I have with the rework version is that while her face looks more refined and smoother, it lacks the element of sadistic and angry of the old one. Since you mentioned that Ruby is the oldest one, I think it would be perfect if you give her more dominant presence. I'm not sure whether it is her eye lashes or pupils, but her face currently slightly lends toward sweet and pretty.

UmbralUmbreon

While I was personally a fan of the older design, I can’t deny that the rework is an improvement over it. I do have to ask though if eventually all characters will be reworked into a single artstyle before the final version of the game releases. I don’t think it’s a stretch to say having 4 different art styles (Shakie’s, the AI, Xenssei’s and the team reworks) would be a detriment to the game’s appeal.


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