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Commission: Luxury of poof

🕑 Added 2022-06-10 18:00:06 +0000 UTC
Commission: Luxury of poof
Commission: Luxury of poof

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I'm sorry if i came off like i was trying to rush you and infact if you would had decided not to do anything about the errors i wouldn't of held it again you because at the end of the day it is your choice, but please do keep up the good work pal.

You know it is very rude to but into other people's conversations like that, so please be kind and mind your own business ok. And further more if someone notices an error they have the right to let the creator know regardless if it's there's or not.

Well, today is not over yet lol Sorry I just had other things to do, fixing now.

That's fine, take your time.

I guess I'm just tired of correcting commissioners mistakes all the time XD I'll fix it again tomorrow

That's cool, but why did you change it to "have this"? Wouldn't "have a" make more sense? I mean i know it's not my picture so it's not my choice how something is said in it, im just asking/wondering.

I fixed the first one. About the second one, I don't know the character and if that's the way she talks.

Nice work Sketch, but i noticed that there is a spelling error in the first one second lines of texts, you have the sentence "Why does the cpu has this problem" and that doesn't make a lot of sense, it should be "Why does the cpu have a problem" and on the second one you have "destroyed another diaper totally" and that would make more sense is it was changed to "totally destroyed another diaper" , just thought id let you know.

Good job Noire


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