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Chameli x Noah comic outline
🕑 Added 2017-07-05 17:16:39 +0000 UTCjust take this
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chameli and noah college comic
settings: cafe, class, hallways, lobby hangout, swim class, more?
- cafe open, showing chameli, moo, skunk, maybe another guy all sitting down with some tea and coffee, textbooks layed about. they discuss the project at hand for ??? class. shot can open up an overhead of the table with books. discussion, "is everyone here?" "noah said he'd come by!" "noah? is he the guy in the front row?" "no thats neil, noah took the pharmacology class last semester i brought him in to help out" and then from off panel "and maybe you can help me pick out what drink to get!"
- enter noah, who just shuffles up to the table waving hi to everyone. crew says hi, but off panel is chameli with her face red and eyes sparkling with a single thought bubble 'CUTE' 'HE'S SO CUTE' she keeps thinking in a next panel which will be lineless with toonier features but giving him handsome chiselled face and sparkly uguu eyes and roses. she snaps out just in time to have her friend nudging her "chameli! stop spacing out."
- "noah is here now we can get started. noah this is chameli" "hi! she's mentioned a lot about you! pharmacist right? thats super cool" chameli sits there, staring and makes a tiny peep but cant open her maw, then coughs terribly and barely hacks out "c-cup water! cup!" and scuttles away. cut to her getting a cup and getting a full cup of just ice, not even looking while thinking "oh my god oh my god he's so cute how am i supposed to even go back over there breath BREATH" she then imagining "ok cham just go over there and sit down and be confident and everyone will think your cool and clap and ok this is silly. I better just go back we gotta do that project, wait-" she glances back "nope he's still so cute ohmygod"
- chameli sits back down, friend; "hey you need more ice?" pointing to ice cup, "i uh like ice" interrupted, skunk takes charge with the group on the project or studying or whatever they are doing. chameli asks her pal next to her, "h-hey uh, this noah guy, who invited him again?" "oh that was trisha she's known him for a while or something,hey maybe he's helping cuz he thinks shes cute." while trisha skunk is talkin, turning to noah for confirmation on some details they will need to know about. he says something that makes her laugh and chameli has a thought of her laughing a ton and thinking noah is the funniest cutie ever.
- more imaginated scenes of trisha saying noah is sooo funny and noah replies how cute trisha is and they get all smoozy and then BONK a ball his chameli's head shes in polo practice. her friend swims over "hey hissy sis you okay? youve been spacing out all practice" chameli rubs her head "oh, yeaa... hehe i dont know uhmm.. hey becca do i... am.. nevermind" "no girl spit it out, whats wrong" "it sounds stupid" "come on nothing you say is ever stupid." "am i ... do you think i'd have any trouble dating a guy?" "what? you? girl your hot and cute as heck. what are you worried about?" "I dont know, i feel like i'm just super awkward or i dont know how to talk sometimes" "maybe to strangers, you talk great to me. you just gotta be yourself and not worry about it." "i guess, i mean, i also hope guys find me.. think im uh" "cham you're a fit hotty, i mean i know it too, we gotta stick together, i get guys in the school gym hitting on me a lot, you too." "huh? well i guess yea" "you guess your butt, every time those awkward guys waddle up to you and ask you if you need that machine and just stand around too long, they are just trying to be smoozy" "i dont know why they would, i mean im a gator i dont have what the guys want" she sais glancing down at her chest" "eh your chest is still bigger than most gals, also maybe you'll date a butt guy whatever"
- chameli starts imagining herself as a cute hourglass babe with a bust, wigglin up to noah and winks at him "hey cutie" she pops out of it, in pants and shirtless at her locker looking at a mirror next to her "you're hot and cute as heck" echoes back in her mind. she sighs heavily holding shirt next to her chest she gets her shirt back on. walking out of the pool area and she nearly bumps into noah and gasps " oh hey chameli! I wondered what other classes you do around here i mean, hah i'm surprised with how busy pharmacy stuff must be!" chameli stares up at him and gulps, blushing " uh.. uh yea! I'm on the pool- p-polo team. (you almost said poo!)" "thats awesome! I swim too i mean, thats probably super cliche for us hahaha! sorry that was probably silly to say" chameli laughs and covers her mouth a bit. "you swimming laps or something or?" "n-no it was just another practice its every morning at 9 thats why we had to meet so early at the cafe earlier sorry if that was too early (chameli STOP BABBLING)" "nah I get up early anyway, adrenaline pumpin. Not to sound cliche, you must be a good swimmer i mean, we both got the rudder tail! he turns his fat tush to the side and perks it straight upward and points at it with his thumb over his shoulder, makes a big toothy grin. Chameli giggles and blushes, he continues though Im not the best swimmer, not EVERY otter swims. hey, anyone else in the group on the team too? Trisha woulda woulda mentioned if she was." chameli blushes and looks away and blurts "hey sorry! i gotta get to my next class i took too long in the locker room (trishatrishatrisha)" "oh okay! sorry if i kept ya, see you at the cafe again in the morning!"
- Chameli is back at her dorm STARING at a hot plate with ramen in a cup, cutting panels of Noah smooching up with trisha. Janny comes in and knows her pal isn't doing great , you are are focused on that noodle cup heh I'm hungry I guess. The cafeteria is still open if you wanted to go! I don't wanna go out. Jan takes her bowl and dumps it in the trash cafeteria sushi, on me. Thanks champs hand. Cham has a cute thought of herself surrounded by fish
- In the hallways walking to/from food they clunk into Trisha who's all peppy hey girrrls! This study groups gonna save my ass I'm so glad we all got together, I mean not that I need it heehehee. Janny clearly rolls her eyes. Trisha you and I would both fail this thing without Noah's help and you know it. Trisha perks up. Omg I know! Thank God I got that big cutie to come in he's a lifesaver. I owe him one with how useful hes gonna be. Chameli clearly crumbling and thinking about Trisha's dumb face morphing in her mind surrounded by the words big cutie. She walks away and janny said I know you'd do fine on this test tho Cham. Cham? Chameli was already walking away.
- Janny catches up with cham, Cham what's wrong? Where's the rush. Trisha is a big HUSSY! janny makes an odd face, hussy? Who says that anymore girl where's this coming from? I know Trisha is a lil doofy but- did she do something to you? no she's fine and sexy with big boobs and all the guys want to date her and stuff. Oooh this is a guys thing, wait do you like a guy? Who who!? I dont wanna talk about it anymore. lemme heeellllp! Is it Noah? You think they are a thing or something? chameli blushes super hard. Girl you gotta talk to him more!. why bother when hes pobably into girls like t-... prettier girls. k fine Ill go talk to him and try to get some info! *winks* chameli startles whaaa no DONT dont worry Im just kidding! Chameli maybe hes already gonna start bumping into you in hallways, maybe he likes to swim too? jan not every otter swims yea and gators hate water too. I gotta get to class!
- Cham already imagining Noah swimming and all shirtless and cute in the water with chameli when she pops out of it and shes already in study group girl, listen! the gangs talking about chapter 11 or some shit, noah is all yea make sure you read that one, the teacher went totally nuts and pulled open answer questions all over from that one chameli in the bg googoo eyeing him. Janny blurts into her viewCHAMELI the playoff games now we gotta go! wait what? i dont know it got bumped and we better go now if we are even gonna play! oh- okay! janny turns to the group sorry we gotta cut and run for the game! trisha rolls her eyes a bit but noah yelps out, thats fine I can text any notes! How long does the game go for? should be over by 2 we hope ah dang, hey maybe we could continue the study group another time? Id love to see the ga- trisha snarks in what?! Noah this test is important! They can go play their ballgame but we gotta keep studying! noah rubs his head, ahh yea, lets keep goin. he turns to the two gals hope you two arent late or nothin! nah i got my suit and chameli is a dork she wears hers all the time J-JANNY STOOOOP what they can see it there!
- Overhead view of the college, just word bubbles coming out chameli your over reacting, trisha is just a big loudmouth who wants good grades. you see how he was almost gonna come with but then just caved when she said stay? He doesnt care uhuh, i think your overanalyzing that one. Cmon we gotta get in the pool. janny your boobs slipping o- dammit i know i got it show some crowds, overhead of the pool, siloughettes playing. Ball flying and some cute gal just nailing it good, mediocre scores, crowds somber but some people are excited and jumping around. Its not a very important game anyway. Show of chameli posed in the water, jumps for the ball and misses and goes underwater. Shot of her floating around looking kinda annoyed with it all. Pops out with a PAH and blinks.
- First thing she sees after clearing her eyes is noah, right there, in the bleachers next to some pal of his or something, he perks up and then a giant smile crawls onto his face, he stands his big cute dumb body up and waves hard, right at cham. She blushes and looks surprised and then it shows him again, he turns his body to the side, perks fat tush out and tail straight up, points at it just like before. She freaks out a lil and smiles real big, noah then turns his head to the side and back and points and starts waving his arms like go go go! cham snaps out of it and dives back into the water, chasing the ball.
- The games at the end, girls sitting out of water, climbing out, towels etc, chameli submarines her head up to the edge and blows bubbles like a gator, grabs the ledge and lugs herself up with her big arms. Noah jumps right in and squats next to her. She looks up and peeps and slips, but then smacks her head into her hand and does a nervous smile hoping he didnt notice. You were great out there! I didnt even know water polo is so cool its like water volleyball soccer! chameli giggles, then asks what are you doing here? I thought you had to study! Trisha- bah come on we can all tell she just wants to use me to get her a passing grade on the test, I just pretended i had an emergency call and ducked out. Shes kinda annoying. w-well im glad you finally got to see water polo yea it was cool! I mean i mostly uh.. I mean iw anted to come see you. Ok this is stupid but i saw the sushi charms on your backpack so i figured you like sushi right i mean- she stares blankly at him and he stalls trying to find the words, you wanna go to that ma sushi house place when you get outta here?. chameli slips on the thing and falls into the water with a splash, then comes back out gasping Y-YES ID LOVE T- i lOVE SUSHI. wow that was loud but oh god yes! haha awesome! You dont even have to change, janny already told the world you just wear your polo suit all over s-STOP!
- Fun end shot of them eating sushi, while she fantasizes about them kissing. Then another end page of them sneaking into the pool at night and he takes his shirt off and she sees he has a big heart on his chest and she dies thinking aobut big brown hearts and they swim together
