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It's almost finished!/快完成了!

🕑 Added 2019-09-29 16:22:26 +0000 UTC

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Transmuter

It looks great! You're making the town far more entertaining and beautiful!

xiaodake45

WWWW我還挺喜歡觸手版的

jefuty(eveningheart)

OK~

jefuty(eveningheart)

The girl below is a little too small to add much, but I added some ideas to the sculpture on the roof!

jefuty(eveningheart)

都用那个的话未免有点单一,我还是想要给不同的建筑设计不同的色雕像的

jefuty(eveningheart)

插在背后了!

Mazuma

反正城鎮中心的雕像都有觸手了,屋頂上的有觸手也不奇怪啊(?

Mazuma

另外屋頂上的雕像,可以考慮和你之前畫的城鎮中心的雕像配對,直接把那個雕像當成是類似這個城鎮的守護神之類的,每個建築都會在某個地方設置的話,就不會奇怪了。

Mazuma

我覺得比較簡單的改動大概就是販賣的裝備變成情趣用品,裝備變成一些像是比基尼鎧甲等比較色情的裝備,屋頂的雕像,可以考慮讓她拿一把劍會比較有鐵匠舖的感覺,看是要讓她拿著,還是插著我覺得都可以。

Transmuter

You could mark the belly of the blacksmith girl with the morality debuff symbol (the arch with the 5 marks through it) to show her as a thrall of the creatures. Or perhaps with the roof creature as well? Nipple piercings, brands, chains, and / or tentacles coming out of the chimney, through the mouth of the roof creature, out of her ass, slowly reaching for the girl selling the weapons. Just a few ideas, but as it stands you are doing great!

Roof structure is great.

A Casual Observer

You don’t necessarily need actual sex or tentacles on screen, just a few heavy handed suggestions. Something to put on the blacksmith for their to be no mistaking her as a thrall. Strong Domination and Submission themes like chains, markings, symbols, mistresses, a thrall market, etc.


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