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The Garden of Ashes Ch. 6

🕑 Added 2025-10-12 16:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Shammy2618

P.S. If you’re ever in the market for a free editor or beta reader, I’d love to throw my hat in the ring. I’ve worked professionally in the field with a few published authors, but I actually got my start back in the day on the DLP forums. Under the name ZanyMuggle, I collaborated with several fairly well-known fanfic writers—mostly in the Harry Potter space. Probably the most notable project I worked on was The Lie I Lived by Jbern, where I served as the primary editor/beta. I’ve since stepped away from doing this professionally, but I’ll be honest—your writing really grabs me. It’s compelling enough that I’d genuinely enjoy helping out just for the love of the craft. Whether you’re looking for an alpha reader, a beta, or an editor, I’d be happy to contribute in whatever capacity is most useful to you. I know this probably isn’t the ideal place to reach out, but I wasn’t sure where else to contact you—your comment section just seemed like the most direct option. Please, shoot me a message if any of this sounds appealing to you, if not that’s totally fine! Either way, thanks for sharing your work. I’m really enjoying the ride.

Shammy2618

First off, I loved the chapter and I believe this is shaping up into one of your most compelling stories, along with Backstep! I love it when you aren’t bound the traditional framework of HP fanfiction, Voldemort/Hogwarts/etc. It feels like it really lets your creativity as an author show through! You’re genuinely one of the best, if not THE best currently working in the medium of HP FF My one laughably minor complaint/ request, is something that I felt it would have added to the chapter, along with giving Daphne a sense of just what the “real” Harry Potter is capable of. I was hoping that when Harry was rightfully pissed off at Robards. That Harry would let out a bit of ole “scary Harry” AKA Killer of Voldemort, out to play (lol we know our boy has his issues with authority figures). Of course he does this by reinforcing his anger with a side of sheer oppressive magical force for maximum intimidation. Similar to when we saw angry Dumbles/Volde. Putting Robards in his place with — “Sure, you might be my superior in the workplace sense, therefore I will “listen”… But you are certainly are not my “superior” in a literal sense. You should remember I killed Voldemort as a child w/ hardly any training, and I am no longer that same child. I am more than capable of tearing apart the ministry brick by fucking brick if I wasn’t such a good guy…. :) (Not that Harry needs to be god like, I hate that. just obviously at Voldemort/ Dumbledore levels of power, but just a bit less magical “refinement”)

TheWateringWizard

Loved it! As soon as Robards was involved, I knew something really fishy was going to happen… loved the ending and the start of Harry and Daphne’s official partnership. Can’t wait to see the relationship grow and develop between these two ^^

HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR

okay, I REALLY wanted Harry to punch and break Robards' nose when he was trying to pull him off the case. And now I just want Harry to start going on a rampage here, and start taking people out if they get in his way. Get Grimmauld Place back under a Fidelius, turn parts of it into a prison to put those people out of the way till he finishes up the investigation. Kreacher can feed them gruel or something lol.


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