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comic test poll

🕑 Added 2025-02-19 15:43:37 +0000 UTC

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RS

I really like this sample comic! As long as it's not an excess amount of effort, and as long as it remains fun, I'd absolutely love to see more of the same :)

Dan Halen

It's an excellent scenario introduction medium! Was not cringe- brilliant idea!

Liard

yeeahh.. when looking up comics for inspiration, there was a lot of inner dialogues, and like you mentioned, they do all feel kinda cringe. I tried to tone it down a lot, but at the same time keep some of it, as I imagine most comics have them because theyre at least a bit well received.

Metall Andrei

I’m of the mindset that “don't explain stuff, show it”, or “less talk, more action”. If you can make a short, introductory comic, for the animation, of how the characters got in that situation, it's a really nice touch, and adds a bit of backstory. Just like the Silvanas exemple you added. The thing that kills it for me is including “dirty talk” or interior monologue like: “damn, i’m soaking wet down there, I can’t wait to feel that big cock inside me”. That shit is an absolute cringe fest and needs to stop. I don't need to read such things, but you can show it, with some quick panels, that the character is “in heat” and wants to go down, without adding text. Sure, a few lines of dialog, or a “narrator” setting up the scene is fine, but please don't go too deep in it, because nobody watches a porno for the plot and describing how horny the character is or writing some mind numbing and forced conversations between characters is a waste of time, time better used for animation :D

ltmueac

Personally, any comic that matches the energy of "thegworks" stuff would be awesome.

Reloge

I think it adds something to it, like what I feel mostly missing. You can see how it leads to the scenario like foreplay xd and depends too. To an ending to it, instead of repeating animation xD Idk how to explain else so no offense pls :D

Arahin

I love it. It definitely expands the horizon to the scenario than just straight dropping an animation with X amount of characters.


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