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Gentle mature charm
🕑 Added 2021-04-26 13:25:41 +0000 UTCA mature fruit is a sweet fruit, are you gonna let a self-sacrificed, sweet, gentle and kind lady like this die of loneliness? there are no correct or wrong answers here, there is ONLY one answer and that is NEVER!
Curious fact on Helena's family:
All the women on Helena's mother's side of the family have premature hair graying, her own mother's hair was completely silvery-white with only 32 years of age, (maybe we can see a white haired Helena at the end of the game *wink*, *wink*)
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SpectralTime
Good to hear and blessed be!
Waifuholic
Actually this is a WiP, this was not meant to be seen publicly, but as patrons you get to see the inside works, mistakes, bad grammar, typos and all (even some inside jokes), the lines you'll see in-game should be polished, well written and grammar corrected.
SpectralTime
So! I do really like the characters, and I think they all have good designs, personalities, and "hooks." But I kind of hope you get a line editor before publishing, because some of the grammar was... rough. And that's unfortunately sometimes pretty distracting for me.
