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[BONUS] Coming Home Pt. 2 (Skyrim/GoT)

🕑 Added 2017-09-11 05:41:35 +0000 UTC

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CC100

Well written and a good pivot to Aegon going to Dragonstone. I am not sure how much you keep your attention on Jon Snow or whether this is just Aegon's story. The whole John puts down Baelish -- it would seem to me as soon as Bran gets to Winterfell, Baelish is a dead man. So I am not sure there is much drama waiting in Winterfell for whatever to happen. In the interest of Aegon, can I recommend not putting in Melisandre. She seems really icky the last couple seasons. Can I also say if you will move the story south to the war between Dany and Cersei, you may need to invent some other characters. Now that you have introduced the idea of quests, maybe you can have other quests pop up for Aegon. I can't think of much besides rescue Yara and save the Sand Snakes but there must be others.


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