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The Arc Family Techniques Ch. 24 (RWBY)

🕑 Added 2020-09-23 16:26:24 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

It'll happen eventually, but Cinder wasn't gonna be that easy. Jaune will have to work harder for it then that.

Seaver IXp

The Cinder experience is too clinical. We need more of Cinder being dominated by Jon.

Alex Woll

Looks like decadent of Salem theory. I’m down for that. And I love the idea of Salem acting as Cinder’s mom.

Cambrian

Appreciate the feedback. Yeah I think Jaune was just too drained to give Glynda anything more than he did when he tried to say it wasn't her fault heh

SpectralTime

On the one hand, I really liked this chapter a lot, and I want to be 100% clear about that because you said as much in the top. I liked the plot stuff, I liked Glynda's overall characterization, I liked the way characters reveal and hide things according to their particular motivations, and I liked that Jaune's limits as a human are finally established. Also, happy snuggle times. But... I do kind of wish he'd been a bit more affectionate with Glynda. It *seems* like part of that is just his not really processing her reaction, but it was pretty clear she was emotionally tied to him and worked up by his kidnapping, and I just wish he'd... tried to comfort her a bit? I don't know. Again, it works in the context of him still decompressing and not quite knowing how to take it, so it's not like it's *bad*, just not quite what I wanted. And *I* threw a vote at Ren, even if I'm not unhappy with dividing attention winning. 's always better than playing favorites, for me at least.

TheSinful

Poor Ren. No votes at all


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