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Professor Potter Ch. 7 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2021-04-14 16:53:06 +0000 UTC

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Arcticwyvern

I would have added a 4th option where instead Harry propositions Daphne with a marriage. Considering the story type it wouldn't be difficult to believe in this version of the Harry Potter world the Lord/Heir to multiple houses can have more than one wife so perhaps he could come forward to Lord Greengrass with an offer of his own, officially it would make him the next Lord Greengrass but Harry could just as easily let Daphne handle the running of the Greengrass estates making her Lady of the house in all but name

MiqoRems

No option four of him staying out of it, but having Hermione use her instead? :V

John P

I dunno about this turn. It's your story, sure, but I find this narrative device of "it's a man's world" to be incredibly tiresome. In the real world it's mostly ahistorical nonsense that ignores the titanic price men paid for the freedom they had - in a fictional setting where every woman is armed with a lethal weapon (one capable of erasing its own evidence, no less) almost all of the time , it's much, much less justifiable. Especially considering the kind of stories our beloved Pimperor normally writes.

DualEquinox

Hermione as both a muggle-born who clings quite heavily to her muggle instilled modern morals and sensibilities and a strong-willed headstrong individual is the person who is most likely to be oppositional and have reservations to a harem/polygamy and sharing Harry so putting her in a position of having to share Harry frequently and often in order to desensitise her to these objections and bring her around to the Harem Route actually does make some deal of sense from a metagaming perspective. It also introduces a witness to the proceeding so it acts as insurance so Daphne can't later try to entrap us through a false rape accusation or something similar (Not saying she necessarily would but then again then the quickly becoming infamous Hinata Option has made me cautious enough to see the benefit in such an arrangement; insurance against a bad end never hurts).

ItsaKipplee

Is the threesome really that needed people? Just make hermione wait and stew. She might get her chapter all to herself as well

Drakeulous

Personally, I would have them still have both of them do detention and ask Daphne to see me after class or something.

IAVL

The consequence is going to be fucked up, isn't? Like what Hinata did in the Naruto Fic.


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