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The Grimm Prince Ch. 2 (RWBY)

🕑 Added 2021-05-05 16:56:38 +0000 UTC

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Sonzofzsea

The. Problem with dealing with the prisoner is that the protege could leave if she had been given a mission before this that slipped Salem’s mind or could find out something and react badly but same with prisoner is you don’t know how bad a condition she is in

SpectralTime

So! I appreciated that you didn't back down on the confused psychological state that he's in, and that it factored well into the sex scene. Also that all of the slave stuff came from Salem rather than Jaune made it a bit more palatable for me. On that note, I appreciate also trying to humanize (for lack of a better word) Salem a bit. 's not necessarily an interpretation I haven't seen before, but originality is overrated and sometimes popular things are popular 'cause they're good. Not sure how I feel about the "king" thing... I like "prince" as a title better? Eh, I guess he could keep it and just make her his "regent." Also, I appreciated that him being rough as per the vote didn't mean he had to be a dick about it, and that he seems to have won Salem over as much by acknowledging and fulfilling her emotional needs as because she "can't beat the cock" I believe is the technical term. Because the emotional element is important to me, legit. I'm fine with both options. I'm admittedly prioritizing the losing one because I figured shoring up the power base and getting an unstable element under control would work better, but I doubt it'll go real wrong. As always, looking forward to more, and still a personal favorite among the rotating stories.

Cambrian

I wouldn't want to give anything away... but you're half right :x

RangersRoll

Taking a wild guess, is the prisoner a certain silver eyed mother?


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