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A Domineering Britannian Pt. 3 (Code Geass)

🕑 Added 2021-08-20 14:56:45 +0000 UTC

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Colin Peden

Damn, some mother/daughter action? Hell yeah, great story so far, as discussed above, a good ending point, but more would be appreciated.

Frostcore

As long as you mention that the idea comes from this series I wouldn't mind, or it could simply be a sequel or a spin off to A domineering Britannian

Benjamin Lawton

*shrugs* Call it the R2 to this series' R1? Or maybe a spinoff-slash-Extended Universe to the original? The main problem with what you're suggesting, is that I specifically designed these ideas to run off of the details of this particular setup – it'd honestly feel too much like I was outright plagiarizing your own concept, if I claimed mine as completely separate.

Frostcore

That are some very good ideas, but I think you should try to make that into another Code Geass series, I planned to let this one end after the third part, or maybe a fourth one were Kallen tries to get C.C to submit, but this series was primarly about Kallen slowly but surely submitting to Lelouch, which had happened now.

Benjamin Lawton

Girl #2: Milly Ashford A bit more bare-bones than the previous, but the long and short of it is Milly eventually finding out that her Lulu has been "sleeping around", and foolishly believes that she can use this to "blackmail" him to going along with her own crazy antics more readily. This backfires on her, as Shirley and Kallen, by now both thoroughly "trained" as their Master's dutiful and loyal maids, turn on and restrain the girl, thereby allowing Lelouch to seduce and dominate her as well. Haven't really put much thought into Kaguya, whether aged-up or not, other than to make note of how her canon self had exactly zero problem with Zero bedding multiple women. And since this time around, Zero actually DOES have a harem…

Benjamin Lawton

Girl #1: Shirley Fenette Lelouch might be a consummate actor and all-around Magnificent Bastard, however Kallen isn't. And while her "public persona" at Ashford may be that of a demure and submissive girl, enough of her new dynamic with her new Master starts leaking into her everyday behavior and mannerisms, that it makes Shirley – with her own crush on the ex-prince – some bizarre combination of suspicious and jealous. Eventually getting it into her head to shadow the two, she ends up catching the two in the act of coupling (while being simultaneously caught by Sayoko) – and once both sides confront each other, the whole thing basically ends with Shirley being seduced into joining Kallen as Lelouch's submissive maid.

Benjamin Lawton

…Nuts. Well then, in that case, here's what I've thought of, in terms of making a sequel work. If the commissioner decides they like these ideas and want to make use of them, then by all means feel free:

Wat3rF0xKail

Since the theme was Japanese women submitting to Lelouch, I kept think girls like Kaguya, Chiba, Inoue and Ayano(being sent by EU to spy on Zero) being next.

Cambrian

To clarify even further: The original prompter is the only one who can submit new chapter ideas. Other patrons with guaranteed prompts can use their guaranteed prompts to resubmit after the original prompt has initially failed in the poll, but only to copy paste the original prompter's idea verbatim.

Cambrian

I should actually clarify because I spoke erroneously before: not just anyone can submit more chapters for A Domineering Britannian as prompts. I'm inclined to continue restricting it to the original prompt giver, and if anyone has any Code Geass ideas inspired by it, I'd prefer their prompts be separate

Benjamin Lawton

Fair enough. Just pointing that detail out, anyway – mainly in terms of how and why Sunrise was able to get away with it, themselves.

Cambrian

I don't write female characters that young

Benjamin Lawton

It's actually an ongoing, albeit controversial, fact that IRL!Japan's base age of consent is 13, literally the lowest age of any developed country on the planet. (Although that said, a lot of individual prefectures have their own local laws on the books, forcing that minimum age higher – though even then, cases of "serious romantic relationships" are granted exceptions, with parental consent.) Kaguya is 14 in R1, and going by her position as "hereditary" leader of the Six Houses – <i>in spite of</i> Japan's long history as being patriarchal nearly to the point of sexist – very likely the last surviving member of her family, as well. I'm honestly not seeing any need for an age-lift, at least in a purely technical sense.

Anareth

If Kaguya Sumeragi was older, I'd recommend bringing her in. Kallen: "Surely a Japanese noble woman won't submit to his advances right?"

Benjamin Lawton

I may do that. Hell, I've even already thought of a plausible(?) way to bring more girls in!

Cambrian

Maybe! This also makes for a good ending point, and not all series need to go on forever. a nice short three-shot might be all this story ever is, and I tried to write the end of this last chapter with that in mind tbh. Still, if people want more, they're welcome to try and submit more chapters, and if the patrons vote for it, I'll write it at the end of the day, lol.

Benjamin Lawton

I am conflicted – I want more, but there obviously isn't a whole lot more that can be done with Kallen. Maybe expand the series to include more girls?

Frostcore

This was absolutly great! It was even better than I thought it would be!


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