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Blasting Off! The Bonus Chapters
🕑 Added 2022-08-22 23:28:10 +0000 UTCHEADS UP! Don't read this if you're not caught up to Chapter 50 of Blasting Off! Make sure you go read all the way to Chapter 50 first instead! There will likely be spoilers in some of the bonus chapter concepts I'll be listing here.
So, unlike MNL, where I had you guys vote on the bonus chapters, I'm not going to do that here. That's because every bonus chapter idea I list here is something I fully intend to include in the story, rather than them just being ideas I may or may not cut down the line.
That said, I do still want your guys' feedback on how you think I should execute these ideas, whether you think there are some things that should happen first chronologically. And most importantly of all, I want to hear what OTHER ideas beyond my list of ideas you guys would want to see.
Is there some popular Pokemon Character I should definitely have show up for some lewds? This is your chance to make your case and let me know WHY and HOW I should have them interact with Cam!
Anyways, to start things off, here's a basic idea of Chapters 51-55 so you guys know the things I already intend to include and don't try to suggest them anyways. Keeping these vague to avoid spoilers:
Chapter 51 - Blue POV. After the end of Chapter 50, this seems obvious to me.
Chapter 52 - Red/Yellow POV. Time for Red to get lewded by Cam at long last. And she is Red over Yellow, she's actually lived longer as Red then Yellow at this point heh. And Cam is pretty locked in to his identity as Cam.
Chapter 53 - Jessie & Jamie POV. As Cam's ride-or-dies, Jessie and Jamie have to get another bit of alone time with Cam. Not just nookie though, also a fun little surprise at the end that I think everyone will love~
Chapter 54 - Fem!Mewtwo POV. Because of course Mewtwo is gonna demand Cam's attention before the 'end'.
Chapter 55 - Cam POV. Led into from Chapter 54, with Mewtwo 'helping' Cam finally face his past and you guys getting to see everything through his eyes at long last. The official epilogue of the Main Story.
And now, onto the bonus chapter ideas! Fair warning, there's a lot of em. Sixteen at the moment, as a matter of fact! In no particular order either. Not sure how I want to order them chronologically just yet, in fact. I think the Gym Leaders coming first does make sense to me, but beyond that... I dunno!
1. Misty (Really jonesing for a loss after her sisters all got knocked up back during Mewtwo’s psychic wave, but Misty didn’t because no one in Cerulean could actually defeat her and ‘earn her’.)
2. Erika (Extremely dignified shibari play, wants to be defeated, wants to be tied up, but needs to be treated like a lady also. Delicate balancing act.)
3. Sabrina (Extremely undignified toy/instant loss play. Claims she has prepared for Cam’s arrival by training her body NOT to cum immediately in his presence. How instead of a Pokemon Battle, they will have a ‘Sex Battle’. Exposes herself, cums immediately the second he touches her and ‘loses’ extremely shamefully. Essentially mind broke herself before he ever showed up.)
4. Elite Four Lorelei (It’s always the quiet ones. Lorelei asks Blue to set up an unofficial Pokemon Match between her and Cam while fogging up her glasses and constantly pushing them up her nose. Blue thinks she’s weird, but does it. Sexy shenanigans ensue)
5. May (A very successful young Pokemon Coordinator, May never forgot her older sister, even after years of being out of contact. When Bethany sends her a letter, May comes running to Kanto, demanding Cam face her in a Pokemon Battle to ‘save’ her sister. It’s all a cover for her need to be fucked silly, of course.)
6. Red/Red’s Mom (The Mother of Cam and Red has a lot to answer for. In the end, she offers up her body, and the two half-human, half-Pokemon clones take her up on that offer, using her to slake their lusts)
7. Daisy Oak (Daisy demanding Cam take responsibility, only to get showered with wealth? Not quite his main girl, but definitely gets fucked by him again and loves every moment of it.)
8. Giovanni/Bill/Steven Stone/Shopkeeper Larry chapter (multiple male POVs all reflecting on Cam’s success, or the state of Kanto, and how they all feel about it)
9. Clair (Lance’s Cousin)(After hearing about how Lance has been practically neutered and is doing nothing to fight back or retake his title, Clair goes to Kanto herself to reclaim their family’s honor by challenging Cam directly. She’s wholly unprepared for Cam’s Dragonite, but not entirely unprepared for Cam’s cock.)
10. Mary/Suzie/Cool Trainer Tyra (multiple female POVs all reflecting on their journey to get where they are… as they all join a public Team Rocket convention, now that the organization is out in the open and official. Each of them is hoping for a chance to get with Cam again… but it’s not likely.
11. Officer Jenny/Nurse Joy (Jenny lost her position as a Pokemon League Guard and was put on patrol around Pewter City, where she ‘catches’ Cam visiting Nurse Joy late one evening. Obviously, she HAS to confront the dastardly criminal who ‘ruined’ her life. And get defeated again. And fucked right alongside Nurse Joy.)
12. Cynthia (Two-Chapter idea. Cynthia has a very hands-off approach with the Sinnoh Region, but is still technically its ruler. She’s the strongest there’s ever been, potentially the strongest Champion in the world. She stops by Kanto to have a little unofficial meeting with Blue, giving him some pointers, and giving off Big Sis energy. But at the same time, she’s heard rumors… of his Big Brother.
13. After a friendly Pokemon Battle with a wager that means Blue has to introduce them, Cynthia meets Cam alone without Blue… and challenges him to a not so friendly Pokemon Battle, under the guise of removing his ‘evil’ influence from young Blue’s life. Needless to say, Cam thrashes her, though it’s the closest fight he’s had in a long while. Cynthia is just happy to submit. Happy to finally have found someone who can own her like she richly desires.)
14. Another Jessie and Jamie chapter of some kind
15. A Red/Mewtwo/Cam chapter
16. The Truth Chapter. Namely, the final answers to Cam's nature and why he is the way he is, tying up everything not fully explained in the Main Fic. A sort of 'Hidden Ending'/'True Epilogue'.
So yeah, if you've gotten all the way to the end of this and read everything, please be sure to give me your feedback, both on the bonus chapter ideas I've already came up with, and on the ideas I may have missed/not thought of yet.
At my current pace, which I have no intention of changing, I'll be finished with the main story and writing the first bonus chapter by the end of this week, so I'll be finalizing things and making a concrete chronological order for the bonus chapters by Wednesday/Thursday at the latest.
As always, thanks for reading!
Comments
Keeper
I guess there could be a Mew one? Maybe Mew/Cam/Mewtwo sandwich
LordMarksman
Blue deserves some love definitely, Giselle the pretty schoolgirl from that lit pokemon prep course could be another one for Blue. I think I PM about her to you before. Anyway as Blue ages he will definitely have admirers, he is the Pokemon Champion and his looks are decent. His bank account from his winning and title are probably no joke either. Actually how much does being the Pokemon Champion earn you money wise?
Cambrian
Hmmm, perhaps. At a certain point it feels like we're sending too many female Champions to Kanto to get defeated and dicked down by Cam, and Cynthia definitely deserves the prime slot for that. Maybe Champion Lyra could be Blue's love interest...
DualEquinox
I noticed in your latest chapter you confirmed that Johto has a different Champion than Lance. Since that is the case and you haven't actually stated who the Champion of Johto may or may not be, what are the chances we could get a Champion Lyra bonus chapter..?
olofkrajster
That is number five. Bethany is the name of Miss Hoenn/That girl who works in pokecenter with nurse joy/Older sis
Kingtombs456
The only thing I think that's missing is early on when cam ran into the underground hookers, unless I missed it earlier, gotta have a epilogue with them
SpokenSoftly
I feel like the Cynthia ones would work best right at the end, the rocket convention and true origin ones could both work really well as either openers or closers depending on the tone you strike with them. Either setting up or wrapping up all the other stories, sort of thing
Frostcore
The bonus chapter 3 and 9 really sound good, especially because there aren't nearly enough smut stories about either Sabrina or Clair. And the Cynthia bonus, which needs no explanation why it would be great. As for Suggestions, maybe a Lusamine bonus chapter? I know she isn't from Kanto, but a bonus chapter featuring her and Cynthia would be great
RanmaChaos
All of this sounds so good. I feel like you pretty much covered everything.
Cambrian
Thanks for the suggestions, might use some of this yeah!
Cambrian
Glad to hear it! xD
Cambrian
Oooh perhaps, thanks for the ideas!
Deranged Degenerate
Or maybe, it can be the start of the official Joy/Jenny clans with them both Cam's personal cumdumps. And both get pregnant after some time since Cam isn't aware of the term pulling out. And since Cam is half pokemon, and with how pokemon breeding works in the game, you should know that species of pokemon is always determined by the female's pokemon species(unless it's with a ditto of course, but we stay far away from that can of worms). So by that logic, the genetics of all Joy/Jenny descendants with look the exact same. Also, Cam has pink hair, so that can make the replace the current Nurse Joy's who aren't naturally looking the part that Cam will inevitably sedu- *ahem* 'force' himself on when he comes to try and corrupt the very foundation of the entire pokemon world.
Shura
I don't really think I need to read other comments, so I will proceed to assume everyone knows of Cynthia superiority! Whatsmore, for authenticity, ahem: Ohohoho!~ Joking, really though big fan of Cynthia and Team Aqua Shelly. Saw a comment mentioning Shelly so thought I'd back up that thought, hopes and dreams held close. :D Cam(brian), this story actually got me to watch an entire playthrough of the modded game. Well played, sir.
DualEquinox
For the Lorelei chapter, perhaps that unofficial match could take place on Four Island of the Sevii Islands? It is meant to be Lorelei's hometown and I don't think you've hit a public humiliation fetish pair with a defeat fetish yet so maybe that could be Lorelei's deal, Cam takes her in front of her home town then *takes* her in front of her home town? Plus the presence of a Rocket Warehouse in the Sevii Islands could be her excuse, to set up the match as the citizens want it gone, so she wants to battle Cam over it? And her public taking also doubles as a statement to the residents that no rocket is in the Sevii Islands to stay? Idk just some ideas.
VincentVanNintendogh
All of these ideas sound amazing! Really glad to see the May idea coming to fruition! The Sabrina idea really has my attention given she is my favorite girl in Kanto. I do have to ask which outfit she'll use given she has had quite a few. Since the game is from Gen 3, I imagine that would be her outfit, but she also has worn outfit, her Gen 5 outfit, and her Pokestar studios Queen outfit. I feel like they could be put to use in some sort of cosplay fashion for Cam. Clair coming to reclaim her family honor is a great way to include her! I remember seeing a couple of pics of art of her with Dragon Fangs for some of her teeth. I think that would be a neat thing to see and include biting Cam as he breaks her on his cock. As for the final thing I would suggest, I still would say that Karen should be the previous E4 member before Lance's loss. It would tie up the loose end of who was there before Blue became Champion, and would probably be a good way to slot her back as one the new E4 in Kanto if Lance is going to go back to Johto. Or, if you already have a solution to the new E4, she could just come back to demand an apology or see what has happened to her spot and bump into Cam. Either way, it seems like a neat way to slot in another of the Johto women for the fic. I've been loving the fic so far and cannot wait to see the conclusion and the coming bonus chapters! Keep up the great work!
Drakeulous
how about a chapter with Cassidy who is an anime-only rival to Jessie?
Anareth
I think that no 10 should be at/near the end of the sequence, if only because it sounds like an opportunity to show off the newly reorganized Team Rocket, and their new recruits, and you obviously can't show off their new recruits if they haven't been introduced yet, can you? (Clair in particular sound karmic and amusing as a really enthusiastic Team Rocket member) As for suggestions: Karen: the darkness type Elite Four member in Gold/Silver and their remakes. She should presumably be in the area, and is probably from Jhoto. Maybe make her a "freedom fighter" that's planning to take down Champion Blue, (and not just because she can't get past the Elite Four to put the champion belt back into Johto hands). Themes: Regional rivalries, "losing to Kanto dick" Janine (Fuschia Gym Leader, Gold/Sliver): Wants to be a member of team rocket and prove herself as an admin/elite operative. Interrogation play maybe? Courtney and Shelly: The Female Magma and Aqua admins. They're here on a diplomatic mission to gain the assistance of Team Rocket against each other. Its not like they want to have sex with Cam or anything... Fortunetly, Jamie and Jessie show up at the end to make sure things go Team Rocket's way. Also, maybe Ariana, Yellow and/or Mewtwo have a minor turf war over who Cam's 2nd IC is.
Drakeulous
if he was going to die in prison I would have it be a Kanto native (maybe a vet from the war) who shanks him for being a traitor to the country and his sacrifices
Cambrian
Yeah, that's why I hadn't bothered including it in the list of bonus chapters, but I don't think I would do an Oak bonus chapter that didn't end in his death. Because that gives this vibe that there's still some small chance of him escaping in the future, and I don't want to give that impression.
LordMarksman
I don't think death via assassination is a good thing here, I think it's more painful to Oak to be forced to fade away into obscurity and no one giving a damn about him anymore. None of his family want anything to do with him and any attempts to reach out is ignored. If your going to kill him off, might be better to do so of natural causes and show that even in this state while wasting away no one is coming for him and he is alone. Thus all he can do is slowly die, think about life choices, and perhaps shed a few tears over what could have been and what he lost before croaking. More painful for Oak that way I think.
Cambrian
I mean, he was eighteen from the start of this fic so he's technically already an adult, lol
Cambrian
YUS!
Cambrian
Yeah Cam is just too busy lmaaaao And yeah, the True Epilogue would be last no matter what heh
Cambrian
Yeah I know Ash's mom is Delilah, but obviously that's not the same woman here. They don't even look the same, the game mom has a different hair color from Delilah Ketchum. Still, might use Delilah's name anyways for the sake of familiarity, hah.
Cambrian
Glad to hear it!
Cambrian
Hmmm, I don't think I want to do that kind of Epilogue Chapter, if only because it sets up a sequel I don't ever truly intend to write, hah. So I wouldn't want to create false expectations. Never heard of Elite Four Karen before, will have to look her up
Cambrian
I was thinking of having a bonus chapter featuring Oak being assassinated in prison, but not sure who to have pay for the assassination. Daisy, maybe? If I did do that bonus chapter, it would definitely show a lot of Oak's thought processes before the moment of death heh
Cambrian
Hmmm, I like the idea, though not sure whether to make it a full-blown bonus chapter, or just have it be a small detail at the end of the Jenny/Joy chapter where she begs for a job hehe
Iafigliola
And maybe if you dont want those chapters too close you coud put the daisy chapters in between. Maybe she pregnant again but this time by Cam. She explains to Blue that she is not her sister but her mother and he is gonna have a brother. That coud be the reason that cam and blue are together when Cynthia apears? I dont know, mybe this is a stupid idea
Cambrian
Yeah probably not gonna go that far, heh, glad you like what you see so far!
Yurien
I wanted to see a time skip of Cam being and adult.
Iafigliola
I know what you mean but i imagine the cynthia chapters more plot driven that smut, and i think it make sense to see the reactions of Giovanni, bill, etc and then in the next chapter the Cynthia's appearance if you know what i mean.
Alduinwins
CYNTHIA
Kazama
Don't think I have any complaints except for #10 xD Is it more a matter of Cam being busy? But like really, no issues here, though I can't help with chronological order xD except for maybe #16 being the last regardless of new ideas being put forth.
Keeper
May have more later but: 6. Mom is called Delia in the anime btw if you need a name for her 13. If you want to have some poké fucking in this, Cynthia's famous Garchomp is female btw
Razgriz0x
Love the line up. Looking forward to the plot and lewding.
Drakeulous
how about an epilogue chapter? Blue is finally defeated after 8-10 years by a Johto native Lyra or Kris (the female player character from HeartGold/Cyrstal respectively) and after learning about an even more significant challenge go and challenges Cam. another idea I have is something to do with elite four Karen. in the manga, she was at one point a team rocket member who joined out of boredom until she joined the elite four with Bruno and Koga.
LordMarksman
Those ideas sound great, I am also kind of looking forward to the various male point of view chapters. Shopkeeper Larry probably have a conniption fit lol, Bill raking in new influence and power I imagine maybe also toasting to his friend Gary and wishing he could have seen his kid Blue in action because he is amazing, and for Giovanni... I think in the end the man is satisfied even if things didn't end like he imagined it. He chose a worthy successor and Kanto is free. I mean sure Blue Oak is Pokemon champion but he legitimately earned it and is kid (A kid who was done very wrong by Oak to point any ill will Giovanni might have had is blown away and instantly replaced with pity and sympathy). The one Giovanni hates is Samuel Oak who is rotting in jail right now. As far as ideas go.... well personally I wouldn't mind another Samuel Oak chapter who is forced to face his choices, broken, and just full of regret realizing he lost everything. Also keeps constantly hearing about Blue and how amazing he is as Champion and although young he's been really good for Kanto region and boosting pride of Kanto natives as "one of their own" is running things. Oak is forced to pay attention to Blue finally and see that everything Blue is... literally had nothing to do with him at all. In a normal happier world he should be feeling pride and satisfaction but all he has left is shame and regret. Oh extra browny points that Giovanni is brought on as one of Blue's region advisors and restore elite 4 status (lance isn't around anymore) since guy is an excellent businessman, skilled trainer, and pro Kanto all the way. The fact that both Cam and Giovanni are at Blue's side happily supporting him and having glory and riches would likely drive Oak mad :) If he wasn't such a egotistical selfish monster that could have been him :) As for more ideas... got to think on it. Admittedly I do kind of want to expand on Lorelai idea besides typical defeat fetish have her desire to be knocked up by Cam and become one of his personal bitches/mistresses he frequently favors.
Cambrian
Hm, I can see number 8 going first, but I'm not so sure about having the Cynthia chapters so early. Feel like they should be near the end of the fic, if only because of how big a deal Cynthia is haha.
Iafigliola
I think that the number 8 shoud be the first chapter, then the cynthia ones, and after that daisy, red, her mom, etc.
darth_potato
noice my girl Cynthia desserves more love and maybe officer jenny if she is so unhappy with her new possition could use a new job as secretery/cumdunp for Cam
Belly
Nice I don't really think there's anything to change tbh. Unless you want to later expand on this story to "conquer the other regions" but in shorter formats or their own stories.
