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Blasting Off! [Bonus #10](Pokemon)(Team Rocket OC)

🕑 Added 2022-09-06 23:12:42 +0000 UTC

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VincentVanNintendogh

Glad to help! I didn't want to sound nitpicky, but it just confused me because I vividly remember Ho-Oh "living" in the top of the Bell Tower the dogs died in Gen II and that to specifically catch it in Pokemon Crystal, you had to catch all 3 of the Legendary Beasts/Dogs first. Anyway, I am really excited for Clair today! I can't wait to see what Cam has in store for her!

LordMarksman

Yeah, I enjoyed the send off for Giovanni here especially. Even if it didn't end the way he originally imagined. In the end, Kanto is liberated, Team Rocket is acknowledged, Oak's in prison, and this proves that Giovanni's efforts were not in vain. Let the man enjoy his golden years, tropical weather, and lovely ladies. It's a long deserved vacation. Who knows maybe sometime in the distant future he might pop by Kanto to say hi to Cam and see how things have changed. Also might be amusing for Giovanni read about himself in new Kanto history book which gave a very "flattering" rendition of him (courtesy of Cam of course :) stating his views and actions and how he was a true son of Kanto. I bet that would amuse Giovanni to no end meanwhile in Prison Samuel Oak reading this has urge to vomit blood both because of that and very little speaking of him showing how inconsequential he was (also courtesy of Cam). Also yes for Bill, I think its safe to say Cam sees guy as a friend and has his trust/confidence. Personally, I sort of want to see Blue vs Steven pokemon battle and Blue wrecking Steven's team like no tomorrow.

Cambrian

You are so right, thanks for catching that before it went up on all the public websites and I got called out on all of them for the mistake lmao. Much easier to fix that right now xD

VincentVanNintendogh

Ah, Larry. Nice to see him again! Glad he’s got a… “happy” ending for himself. He deserves it. I really love how you wrapped up Giovanni here. Dude deserves a nice retirement, in this universe, at least. Glad he’s living his golden years out in Alola. Bill hunting for Legendaries, specifically Johto’s, makes perfect sense to keep Kanto “safe”. Though, isn’t Ho-Oh the keeper of the dog trio and Lugia the keeper of the birds? Didn’t Ho-Oh revive the three “dogs” who burned in the tower?

Cambrian

Glad to hear you like him heh

Cambrian

Glad you enjoyed it!

Readm

i like the way you write giovanni in this story pretty much every other story i've ever read just has him being petty evil but he actually had real motivation in this and i felt some real character growth

Razgriz0x

Ah, world building. A tedious but necessary task for any great story. But world building in what is basically an 'Erotic Novella'? (Smut Novel) that is rare. Thanks for the perspective. Looking forward to seeing Clair learn her place.


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