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A Perverted Galaxy Far Far Away Ch. 38 (Star Wars)

🕑 Added 2022-07-05 15:18:52 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Huh, never knew this. Appreciate the correction, hopefully it sticks but I'm liable to forget so feel free to correct me again if I make the same mistake xD

Just FYI, it's opposite tack. It's originally a sailing term.

jw

this is a solid idea. slow corruption is always fun. and has a sense of "Realism" to it.

SlayingHurdle72

I do like the idea of tylo being ashokas' coming of age present. you could age her up slightly to 16(she is 14 at the start of the war) that way we can also tease her by doing lewd things to annie (if we keep her ashokas master) in front of her, making it a slower corruption and maybe make ashoka into a voyager where she enjoys watching us fuck annie, maybe even drag barris into watching with her where they start to finger each other while watching. you also did mention a while ago about wanting to stretch out the clonewars since it is so short (3 years is stupidly short for a galaxy spanning civil war under normal circumstances), so this could be doable. in the end it is up to you how you want this to go since it is your story, just throwing out an idea.

Readm

Dont Age up Ashoka but make her our Apprentice instead of Annie's

Ome Kruger

I think making Ahsoka Obi-Wan's Padawan is a great idea she could still have basically the same relationship with Annie maybe they could be closer since they aren't master and Padawan

Keeper

Also lol, I just realized that we still have a bunch of meetings left before the war part can start. Aayla and Tylo gotta meet the 327th Star Corps and their commander(who may or may not have the nickname Bly/Blythe already). And maybe as part of that Tylo gotta talk with Bo-Katan again to figure out wtf she's gonna be doing(aside from "him" :P ).

Keeper

Need to wear something to show off her assets when the Secura and Ti teams go to one of the jungle planets. Can't make Aayla and Maris claim all of Tylo's attention ;) Or its what she wears when she ambushes Tylo to make him finally knock her up, letting her primal urges overtake her https://www.sideshow.com/storage/product-images/300096/shaak-ti_star-wars_silo.png

VincentVanNintendogh

I do think it would work best to have Ahsoka be Obi-Wan’s apprentice. Gotta keep the Trio/Disaster Lineage together. Plus, what is Star Wars without giving Obi-Wan constant heart attacks and migraines? On a side note, if Maris is now here, does that mean we could eventually get to see Shaak-Ti in her gorgeous TFU outfit?

Keeper

"It would be grossly irresponsible to risk knocking Aayla up when she was going to have to be a General in the GAR for at least however long it took them to unravel the Sith’s schemes." You know, I'm starting to think Stass Allie or one of the other Medical Corps members need to hold a Sex Ed lesson before Tylo, Annie etc go out into the galaxy more. Let them know about condoms, pills etc :P And the Jedi Order's views on sex("Oh, we're more than fine with it. As long as it doesn't lead to long lasting emotional connections or love. Have as many one night stands or fuck buddies as you want as long as you come by the medical bay and get your shots and pills to prevent accidents.") Can use Barriss as the practical example since she wants to join the Medical Corps. Show off her clitoris, cervix and womb or hymen to the whole class before Allie asks the padawans to help her make Barriss climax using the force so they can see an orgasm from center stage. ;) Speaking of Ahsoka and Barriss, if there are any Jedi gals who should get together in this (sorta like Tylo and Annie's romance)its them. Total lesbians but they do love Tylo's hard dick and rank it as #2 after each other

Juan Garcia

Well it is fan fiction you can go two routes with this you can just make the Clone War start later or just make the Clone War last longer.

Keeper

Could make it that's she has only just turned 18 now. Or her 18th birthday is in a future chapter(and Annie's "present" is Tylo ;P )

tornadoboy

@keeper It is low key implied in the movies too. We know the Jedi were being sent out on dangerous missions. Anakin and Obi Wan discuss saving each other's lives a ton before the second movie. That line where Obi Wan says "that business doesn't count) when they're parting ways i think? Logically the separatist threat would have had a bunch of proxy fighting so all of them could sort of be combat veterans before the clone army becomes a thing.

Keeper

It's your verse. Could just say it takes longer/has some parts where it was basically a cold war and the fighting was relegated to proxy planets/conflicts..

Cambrian

Yeah, it might work as say, Ahsoka has been Plo Koon's apprentice, but she's practically ready to be Knighted, so she gets assigned to Annie for a year or something so Plo Koon can take on another padawan? Will have to think on it some more, but there's definitely ways to make it work.

tornadoboy

Having Ahsoka be about 18 or so seems doable though. Suppose you say it's an unusual pairing because Annie is very young and Ahsoka is older than usual. That the Jedi Council did it because they want padawans with masters but the war is causing a shortage of masters. You could argue that Ahsoka was originally with Plo Kloon but has to be moved. Could be that you kill him off? It doesn't feel like he's that critical to canon? The alternative is that the council is also trying to move up younglings quicker because it lets padawans serve in the field. So Kloon gets a fresh padawan (who's younger and so needs more specialized mentoring) and so they move Ahsoka to the Annie/Obi Wan pair. You could actually use it as an avenue to explore how the Jedi Council are somewhat shady too. Like maybe they're bending rules in an effort to have more Jedi fighters. That's assuming you want to have Tylo chart a somewhat independent/neutral course between the absolutes of the Sith and the Jedi Council? Like maybe there's a way to be light side without being a bunch of prudes?

Cambrian

The issue with this is the Clone Wars literally only lasts three years. So a timeskip wouldn't necessarily make Annie very much older, lol. That's why I'm having such an issue figuring out how to age up Ahsoka while also still having her as Annie's Padawan, because literally, Anakin Skywalker turns into Darth Vader at 22 years old, lmfao.

tornadoboy

I'd say bring in an aged up Ahsoka later once Annie graduates. Bring her on after a time skip into the Clone Wars. Have her receive the padawan relatively close to her age but still somewhat junior. You could argue that Tylo's influence allows Annie to be less volatile and thus lets her rise to Knight status sooner. And the council is in desperate need of qualified masters which is why Annie gets assigned a padawan sooner than usual. You could make the case that the council thinks her sort of qualified because she's seen more action due to the events causing the start of the clone wars. But because Annie is young for it, they also have Obi Wan, Shaak Ti and/or Aayla Secura advise her on mentorship which brings Ahsoka into Tylo's orbit.

Cambrian

My thoughts exactly~

Keeper

Making Ahsoka Obi-Wan's second padawan would be kind of funny. Cause he'd be so mad when she gets corrupted as well by his former padawan and her boyfriend.

JoeSchmomo

“The Horny” strikes again

Kage_at_Fap

Gotta fuck that stick out of Shaak first. This is the way.


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