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Blasting Off! Ch. 31 (Pokemon)(Team Rocket OC)

🕑 Added 2022-08-03 22:15:12 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Glad you're enjoying that, always unsure if its gonna land right xD

Cambrian

Hmm, maybe for a bonus chapter I'm thinking!

lala jhones

Do you think Daisey will be coming back? She reminded me of a female version of the bike salesman. Her interactions were hilarious

VincentVanNintendogh

Another banger of a chapter! I love how Red’s POV feels like it’s more of the game mechanics, rather than a character. The way you describe her POV just works well for it.

Cambrian

Thats a fair critique and if I'd thought of it back when I was plotting out the story outline I might have worked at least Misty into the story a bit more, like what I've done with Jessie and Fem!James. But at this point we're too far in to change things now. From this point on, we're going pretty much full speed for the next 24 chapters all the way to the end of the main story xD

Anareth

Honestly, I'm not sure that keeping the most iconic and even semi iconic characters of the game/series completely out of the main plot is a good idea. Unlike in the Elden Ring series, this one relies a bit too heavily on one off characters.

Cambrian

Hehe, I got ideas for Erika, Misty, and Sabrina when we finally get to the bonus chapters. I'll probably start plotting them out around Chapter 40-45 of the main story, I'm thinking.

Cambrian

Thank you for catching that, fixt it! Thankfully we're done with Saffron for the moment lmao

Cambrian

Giovanni told Cam to go to the Hideout and pick up his new uniform. So of course that's what he's gotta go do. Bill's phone call is secondary :P

LordMarksman

Ugh... that's a bad call if I ever heard one. You shouldn't dismiss one of your best assets on literally the biggest mission of your organization's history. Sure they are mostly wrapping things up at this point, but it's not over until you are safely back and secure at your base. Last-minute hiccups and unexpected variables are completely possible. As Red popping in is exactly going to prove that point. It's a shame too because Giovanni KNEW something was bound to go wrong and wanted Cam there as an emergency response to fix it too.

LordofCatz

You made the Saffron mistake again, otherwise great chapter

Pbc98

He actually does in the rom hack, Giovanni tells him that he's free to go essentially

LordMarksman

Would Cam really leave immediately? I mean don't get me wrong I do think he would eventually go to Bill. But right now Team Rocket is smack dab in the middle of a mission. Things aren't over yet until the team goes back to base. At the very least Cam should realistically be on standby. I can understand if he was sent to hold a certain position for checkpoint in which Red doesn't end up running into. Thus Cam and other Rockets don't get caught up in chaos she causes. But I can't really see Cam just leaving directly to Bill and going to Cinnabar right then and there.

TheSinful

Red isn't wrong about her journey coming to an end when she fights him. Also, looking forward to Erika. She actually DOES have a defeat fetish in the game so she'll probably cream herself when Cam beats her.

Pbc98

Its an infestation.... my god, its everywhere

Cambrian

No, no... the defeat fetish is WORLWIDE! :O

Cambrian

heh, thanks!

Pbc98

Kanto definitely has that defeat fetish ingrained into them, now i wonder what other regions fetishes are? Johto's domination fetish?

Razgriz0x

Knew Suzie was gonna get some. Another interaction between Red and Cam, and Red getting turned on? Yeah, defeat fetish indeed. Keep up the aweaome.


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