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The XXX-Gene Ch. 1 (Marvel)

🕑 Added 2023-01-01 15:39:00 +0000 UTC

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Marvin Baltes

ok this power is simular to a brain child of a MHA quirk for almost about 2 months

BurglarOfTurds

Never seen this many likes and comments on patreon before lol

Devon

if he's as smart as suggested, it shouldn't be much mental effort to hold himself back to the top of the bell curve once he passes that point. Self control is easier to train the higher your intelligence grows. Though, it DOES still have to be trained. Where is he in highschool actually? 15?16?18? One of my favorite parts of Xavier and his utter bullshit is that even characters who complain that they hate school and learning end up with doctorates. often before even graduating 'highschool'. Heroing would interfere with his sports career, but there are a few characters who managed it regardless.

Miscmagician

Man his power really took yujiro hanmas advice serious

Carlos Barron

It'd also be cool if his boosts work longer on mutant girls or make them prettier, as an excuse to do it more.

Carlos Barron

Rolando, you are a fucking genius. That would be the greatest power for him.

SiriusSmut55

XXX Gene is great suggestion for the title. As for my own title idea, perhaps Cummings and Goings might work?

Rolando Estrada

This should be one of his super powers. https://youtu.be/Ztu8tqEGD4g . Would be funny as hell to see him do this and while the enemy is getting off he runs/fights them to win.

Rolando Estrada

+1 to the Title of ( XXX-Gene)

Juan

Also beyond power rankings for certain characters, my knowledge of mutant Marvel is basically Deadpool and Wolverine are cool and Skylocke,Rouge, and Domino are hot. So it'll be interesting to see what you do with the story.

Juan

Cool story start. The Jock realizing he needs to shape up and take life seriously, and all it took was superpowers. Through Chad Cummings huh. That's an even more unfortunate than Lana Cummings. Except in Lana's case, her mom is a super porn star and Lana's hope's and dreams all revolve around taking after her mother. Given the comments on parents with an s and patreon sucking in the bad way, I assume Chad isn't going to get anywhere near as close to his mom as Lana does to hers.

Cambrian

Good catch, fixt!

V01D

Intelligence fits better than Intelligent

Cambrian

Most roll sheets do not bother with middle names no, just first and last. But also yes, Ms. Kenner does seem to have it out for our protag. I wonder why that is~

Deranged Degenerate

Um, you do know that middle names are on roll sheets right, so Ch-Thad is completely different justified in calling himself Thad since it is technically his name, Ms. Kenner was just being a bitch.

pan

"Doesn't want to be a jock anymore" doesn't help at all. Honestly, it's the most unrelatable character concept you could pick, which turns the whole thing into a giant NTR for me.

Cambrian

We'll explore Thaddeus' parents soon enough~

Cambrian

Glad to hear it!

Joshua Kei

This story seems okay so far, too early to tell for now. I like the Thaddeus' mindset, but it's a poll story so people probably going to pick sus choices. What about his parents? Shouldn't Xavier be talking with him and his parents together?

KOS 1100

Very nice quite like the Mutant ability and the character development already this is going to good

Cambrian

Appreciate the second heh

Cambrian

Appreciate the feedback. TBF, the MC himself doesn't want to be a jock anymore, that's kind of one of the things I was trying to get across in this chapter. He also prefers Thaddeus over Thad, but part of his newly augmented intelligence is recognizing that trying to get the people he's known all his life to start calling him Thaddeus instead of Chad is a work in progress. Thad is his compromise name for those people who have always known him as 'Chad the Jock' when now he wants to become more than that.

el-Pi

I am Seconds XXX-Gene.

pan

Not really into the name "Thad" or a jock MC at all

Cambrian

Happy to hear it! =)

RanmaChaos

A good start. I look forward to more.

ReaperOfOaths

Good, banger show

Cambrian

Is that a good or a bad thing? xD

ReaperOfOaths

Everytime I see the name "Thad" I'm reminded of Blue Mountain State.

Cambrian

Now that does have some potential heh

The Arn

For the name, in keeping with the theme of the story, my suggestion is "All American Mutant

Kejmur

Anything 'modern' may fit really. Sedusa from Powerpuff Girls or something could fit just as well, lol. But yeah, I would say keeping it as 'superhero' fits the theme the best.

Bi Zuko

I have to second XXX-Gene, that's good.

Cambrian

Heh thats also a good one. XXX-Gene or Degeneration X, hmmm

VincentVanNintendogh

First off, loving the first chapter! I always love Charles’ intros on finding a new mutant. Thaddeus mutation is also shaping up to be a fun one. Secondly, as a for a title, how about “The XXX Gene”?

Cambrian

Ooh I kind of like Degeneration X. My only concern is that people will think its set in Generation X specifically when I'm planning to use an amalgamation of different timelines haha

Berix

I offer the awful, but comics-inspired names: Degeneration X and Fuckstraordinary X-Man

Smile Dip

Ha! Fair enough~

Cambrian

100% true, it's almost as though Ms. Kenner has it out for him! Or maybe she has ulterior motives :P

Smile Dip

I mean, if Thaddeus is really one of his middle names, it's not lying to say it's his name. A fair few folks prefer going by their middle name.

Darendarus

Oh no lol.

Cambrian

That might be a possibility, though my memory is shit so I'm afraid I won't be able to keep track of it. Hmmm

Cambrian

Glad to hear it, thank you for your feedback on this =)

Cambrian

Hehehe, poor Thaddeus. He's trying his best here, but when your name is literally Chad Thaddeus _______ Cummings, you're starting from a deficit for sure. And yes, that blank space represents his OTHER middle name. His parents were not kind to him :V

Cambrian

Glad to hear it, knew I had to start things off right with a bit of sex to give people an idea of what was to come lol ;P

Cambrian

Heh, the only problem I have with this is I don't really have an idea for what Thaddeus' super name is going to be yet. Boost Star is as good as any, but I'm not in love with it yet

Drakeulous

Also maybe in the future have the chapters named like the comics. Like [name]: #1 or issue 1

WolfeBorn

Im liking the idea and the first chapter and look forward to future chapters!!

Darendarus

Oh wow. I've never cringed so hard at someone's name before lol. Great story though. I'm looking forward to seeing how the conversation goes between them lol.

Gregory Sullivan

Love this story so far I'm a bit of a degenerate so I love stories with harems and lots of smut, it's a huge plus when the story is as good as yours usually are as well. Keep it up and write as much as you can I'm sure we will all follow along while hanging on the edge of our seats.

Drakeulous

For the name how about something like X-men: Boost Star (or what ever Chad's super name ends up being).

Cambrian

Potentially~

Cambrian

Its a set amount for a certain type of person (normal people /cough) and different for other types (powered people xD)

Rolando Estrada

Pssst, does he get a lesser copy(still permanent) of a lady's powers each time he(hopefully it's both for more of a boost) cum's and has to get repeats to get all of a copy? Would be the way it looks for now, i don't know if you will correct me or change his ability.

Staggi

Is the boost based on the person he does it with or is it a set amount?

Cambrian

Hehe fair enough, glad you're enjoying it for the moment at least~

Collar Spider

Interested to see where it goes, clearly we're gonna have an option between going with Xavier or Ms. Kenner (Mystique, I'm guessing). Although, I'm usually not too into the western comics so my interest will probably wane over time sorry 😅 but don't worry these are usually some of your most popular stories.

Cambrian

Plan is to keep it mostly pure, but maybe some Worm characters will show up if I think it's appropriate. Gonna have Worm and Overwatch characters in the DC story tho as well eventually so we'll see

Kejmur

Also is this 'pure' Marvel story, or some expies from other settings may show up? Especially superhero ones would fit, like some Worm characters could easily be 'mutants' for example.

Cambrian

Yus. On that note, what do you think so far? >.>

Cambrian

The first of several in fact!

Collar Spider

True, wouldn't want it to go on too long without positive feedback

darth_potato

Leta go new year new story

Cambrian

Heh, if I'm writing dogshit, better to know early on rather than 30-40 chapters in I figure xD

Collar Spider

Hmm a sorta Shonenjump kind of elimination process, that's interesting.

Cambrian

fufufu

Kejmur

Thad, ask Xavier for potential name change as a priority to join his litlle club, lol.


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