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Coming of Age Ch. 1 (Percy Jackson)

🕑 Added 2023-01-02 15:17:33 +0000 UTC

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Tony DeWitt

This story should obviously be called Percy Jackson and the deadliest college Sorority. Also genderbent Mr D would've been great, but Hestia is Bestia as they say.

Demeon

Gotcha, its a Percy thing and she wont just wake everyone up with a handy lol. I Like that.

Zarroc789

Looking forward to see how you work this universe

Max Turry

Oh I thought you said the prophecy was about when he turned eighteen sorry. I misread

Cambrian

Uh, PJO isn't a YA novel/series, its a series of children's books. There's nothing 'Young Adult' about a series that follows a 12 year old all the way to 18 lol. What you don't seem to quite get is that the whole demigod thing is aged up, as in most of the demigods don't start getting truly hunted by monsters until they come of age, except perhaps under certain circumstances. Everyone is older, but also the points at which things happen to them before canon starts have happened later in their lives. So no, Luke hasn't had six more years of anything, or missed any opportunities. And yes, will obviously be changing any prophecies that have ages in them, ofc. This is how I billed this story concept from the start. "PJO canon but aged-up" is what the majority voted for, heh. Lots of things on the lore-side will be mostly the same, just everyone will be 18+ instead of 10-18. Ultimately, the whole thing is going to be a smutty AU mess and I will gladly throw canon out the window wherever I need to in order to make the aged-up part make sense and the smut flow.

Deranged Degenerate

I think the biggest thing this story needs to address is the age. Since this series is originally a YA novel, having the young Percy Jackson suddenly become a grown adult when official media just made him 18 as well is a bit jarring to say the least. And reading the comments, the big prophecy that Frat dude, Aqua boy, and Skeletor avoided for years needs to be changed since everything that was leading up to that point has been thrown out the window for the sake of age-ing the cast. The obvious one is Luke, he was already at a breaking point by the time the events of the first book happened, no way he would spend 6 more years under the Olympians rule and having the missed opportunity of building Kronos' army in that amount of time, especially the while point of Battle of the Labyrinth trying to stop him from becoming a vessel for Kronos and gaining the last remaining Demi-gods to awaken him. This is a porn adaptation of PJO, but lots of consideration needs to be taken account to do justice to the series that we all read so many years ago back in middle school.

Juan

? Who are you talking to you? If your talking to me then the fact that Cambrian changed Percy's age to 18 and how that fucks the original story is literally my whole point. If not me then I don't know who your saying actually to.

Max Turry

Though I feel horrible for saying it I kinda want hestia to still just be the keeper of the hearth cause that means she’s probably easier to charm (also probably cuter relationship but I still hate myself for thinking that)

Cambrian

heheh glad you liked that~

Cambrian

Well originally it was because I was a horny pervert and I write horny pervert stories. But NOW because of a reader comment I've decided its because Percy is the reincarnation of Adonis in this fic, making him effectively cat nip to female demigods and goddesses :D

Max Turry

Hestia best girl shall get best boy percy

Max Turry

It’s actually 16 “A Half-Blood of the eldest gods, Shall reach sixteen against all odds, And see the world in endless sleep. The hero's soul, cursed blade shall reap, A single choice shall end his days, Olympus to preserve or raze.

HeirOfRohan

Fuck Dionysus of any gender. Hestia best girl all the way!

Demeon

Im just confused about the whole handjob without any questions of does she wake everyone up with a handjob lol.

VincentVanNintendogh

Loved the opening chapter! Stuck as close as you could with the actual opening, with some obvious adjustments for age. Annabeth coming on strong for a daughter of Athena. Curiosity really does work for her on leading down lewd paths. The seaweed line made me chuckle, glad we still have that dynamic still present.

Cambrian

Appreciate the feedback, definitely going to be working on trying to get the personalities of these characters right, while also extrapolating on what they would be like as young adults. Annabeth definitely coming on strong... but then, Percy being the reincarnation of Adonis might explain that (though it wasn't something I had in mind until another patron suggested it xD)

Drakeulous

Didn't expect us to directly start off with a hand job from Annabeth. I would have expected it from a daughter of aphrodite maybe trying to soften the blow (your moms dead but at least you got a handy from a hot girl). Honestly she kinda came off as heavily on the spectrum.

adorsey

Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Cambrian

He's bottling it up and repressing it atm. He thinks she's likely dead, but hey at least he killed the Minotaur, her supposed killer.

TempestK

Why isn't Percy more worried about what the fuck happened to his mom?

Cambrian

90% the second one I'm almost sure of it >.>;

Juan

Hah, good luck with that. A rehash of the story but all of the ages are different is certainly an interesting challenge. I'm curious how much of the story is going to be you cleverly tying things together to fit and how much is just going to be fuck it It's a porn story.

ReaperOfOaths

PJO was my gateway drug into fanfiction and smut so seeing a proper long-form fic of yours take place there is pretty fuckin sweet

Cambrian

Okay so yeah, moving all the ages on those things up basically xD

Juan

It has been years since I read the books, so I refreshed my memory on The Great Prophecy and yeaaah. So remembering that plus all the small details I'm remembering and have forgotten, I'm pretty sure the story completely changes with Percy reaching 18. Like it fucks with things like nobody's business if I'm remembering things right.

Cambrian

Heh, it'll be up to the patrons how exactly the story progresses, so I wouldn't want to get too presumptuous. It's not like The Grimm Prince where Jaune started out as a newly made humanoid Grimm. Percy is still just beginning in this fic. Appreciate the suggestions though~

Cambrian

Ooh Coming of Age is a strong one yes

Cambrian

Yeah people wanted a rehash of Percy canon instead of something set later in his timeline so I altered the ages. In this porn-ified version of the universe, demigods are hunted a lot less up until they come of age. So everyone in Camp Half-Blood is a young adult How exactly is Age important in the first five books if you don't mind me asking? Need to know so I can plan out how this AU is gonna go heh

Nanaya7Nights

If this is a Percy power fantasy then maybe: The God of Conquest? Rise of the Demi-god King?

Rolando Estrada

+1 for (Percy Jackson's) Cuming of Age

Rolando Estrada

You can just make it that he is the third reincarnation of Adonis, with Genghis Khan being the second. Dude got around since a few hundred million people are his descendants in Europe, Eastern US, and rest are spread out from there. When they reincarnate it doesn't have to be in a Demi-god, you can also make it so he is a multi-generation demi-god like Frank's family and have some connection to Hypnos from WW2 to explain away why LOTS of ladies (that are already randy) tend to completely lose their inhibitions around him.

Berix

I come bearing more possible titles. Diary of a Demigod ('s sexual adventures? idk. Bit plain) (Percy Jackson's) Coming of Age Divine Birthright/Heritage Kinda hard to get specific without knowing any more about the plot direction.

Cambrian

Good catches, thank you!

Cambrian

Heh, well if I go with the suggestion of making Percy a reincarnation of Adonis, that could be why Hestia starts to catch feelings for him. We'll have to wait and see :P

Juan

Interesting start. Curious to know if Percy's age being different is going to come up in story or is that just a patreon thing? Age is very important for the first five books if memory serves.

Gamer

You’re thinking the “Isles of the Blest”, where you have to be worthy of Elysium across 3 different lifetimes. You just have to be good in one life to get Elysium. Also, Orion is a bad guy in PJO or at least it’s sequel

Gamer

I would also recommend that if this story is more of a mix of serious and smut rather than just largely smut, that this become a more long-term story, regardless of the results of any vibe checks. As much as I like smut as the next reader here, this could make for an interesting story that doesn’t need every situation fixed or solved with sex. Although obviously it will still have a heavy sex/smut element.

Alex Woll

Casual reminder that Percy is Hestia’s favorite.

Alex Woll

Could be reincarnation of Adonis and Orion since it takes 3 heroic deaths for a demigod to get into Elysium in the PJO world.

Collar Spider

I think Hessia is the more logical choice. Like Dionysus wouldn't be here if he wasn't being punished and he doesn't necessarily bring much to the table if he was. Meanwhile Hestia makes a lot of sense since she was at Camp from the first book. Even if we don't get to fuck her, as unlikely as that would be, I'm sure she'll be an interesting character.

SpiritCrystal

1. Percy’s mmmm (mom typo) 2. Percy is furry…ous (fury typo) 3. Untitled MUTANT project (copy paste authors note error) Hestia for SURE (variety and…you know.) Looks good!

Joshua Kei

Hestiaaa😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️ (is she still going to be a virgin goddess? If you're keeping it that way don't put her in polls, I'm sure everyone would choose the fuck Hestia option. One way to change that is just clarify she isn't a virgin goddess in this universe, that would make things less OOC when everyone votes to fuck Hestia)

Cambrian

Probably yeah :P

Cambrian

Hehe, you're not wrong, there's a reason she's a choice :P

Draconic Hermit

No, but she'd actually give a crap about her campers, and just because Mr/Mrs. D is the patron of parties and booze doesn't mean they're gonna instigate raves on a wim, especially since they're only in CHB in Canon due to cockblocking Zeus and is basically forced to go cold turkey, making them pissed and irritated at life and is basically in permanent "Fuck the world, it can go to hell" Grump mode. Hestia would be the perfect director, she's basically the mom every Demi-God with a divine mother wishes how their's would act, and a second one with a good relationship with their mortal mom, and would have a better handle in taking care of her kids and making sure they don't devolve into being like their parents in terms of petty spite due to actually giving a shit about them. Lost opportunities when it came to her Canon role. Plus, less bias when it comes to Percy due to the wife's Ex being Posidon's Son. TLDR; Just because Hestia's more strict doesn't mean she's the worse option. If anything she's vastly superior, as agreed by most of your voters.

Sharkboybeast

Hestia definitely, she should have been running the camp from the beginning.

Cambrian

Yep, Percy is the focus of the fic and the main perspective the story will be told from. Being a bunch of randy coeds, Camp Half-Blood IS going to be a lot more sexually prolific in general, but none of that is going to be seen on screen. It'll likely end up being a harem fic like most of my work, centered around Percy> As for Percy being the reincarnation of Adonis... hmm, I like that. Might use it!

Gamer

So, just to clarify, this is a Percy-centric fic, right? Because for all I know, you could be making all beings of the Divine World more sexually prolific. Personally, I think it would be best if Percy gets all the hottest girls, even if it means breaking up some canonical pairings. Maybe even get the goddesses including the 3 Maiden goddesses or his divine stepmother Amphitrite or even Hera herself. If you want to use an official reason on why Percy is so appealing to females (beyond the “lazy” reasoning of “porn universe” that you used in Peter Parker’s New Groove), you could say that Percy is the reincarnation of Adonis, the most handsome man of all time (souls can be reborn in PJO in the case of good souls if they choose), and that his divine heritage supercharged his appeal to females to the point that not even the most strong willed females can resist him.

Cambrian

Well, looks like you're in luck since she's winning by a landslide xD

Cambrian

Glad to hear it!

Cambrian

ah but in what way? would she be as much of a party animal as a goddess Dionysus in charge of a bunch of coeds? :P

Cambrian

true~

Bi Zuko

HESTIAAAA. She doesn't get *nearly* enough love. I actually think I subscribed to your patreon because I saw you'd done a Hestia fic.

Alex Woll

Definitely hyped for this.

Barret

Hestia is Bestia. Plus she'd be so much better a Camp Director than any version of Dionysus

francesco

Hestia bestia


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