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Breaking Providence Ch. 31 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-01-03 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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RanmaChaos

Thus was a really good chapter. The conversation between mother and daughter was very well done. Good job!

Cambrian

Glad Elsenthia and Lisanna's interactions are working for ya. As for Serafina just being evil, I don't think it's quite that clear cut, but she's not necessarily a paragon of goodness either. Learning the wrong lessons is a great way of putting it xD

Cambrian

huehuehue

Cambrian

good catch on the breast thing, fixed it! I like eyes better than gaze here tho

SpectralTime

…Poor princess and queen. It’s because they care that they hurt each other. That part feels too real… Everyone else is excited for Marcus to turn on the Church. I don’t know. There is corruption there, but Serafina just being evil doesn’t feel fair, especially in light of her at least kind of learning her lesson last time. …Then again, I guess she might’ve learned exactly the wrong lessons. We’ll see I guess.

V01D

“It had been her will that saw her breasts naked breasts exposed to Marcus’ eyes.” - eyes should be ‘Gaze’, and you have ‘breasts’ repeated twice

KOS 1100

I suspect some quite interesting events are going to happen hehe.

Kaijucifer

Hahahaha

Cambrian

whaaaat nooooo

Cambrian

Soon my friend, soon. But also they don't really talk until Arc 3. So soon might be subjective? :V

Cambrian

>:3

Cambrian

fufufufu

Kaijucifer

Given your works mostly revolve around sex and how real churches have a long history of depravity, I suspect they're going to try and r@pe Roka Ra before executing her, and Marcus will turn on the church.

SpiritCrystal

Just waiting here patiently for Marcus to get a chance to talk with Roka, while the elves try to convince themselves they’re still all pure and logical and proper and stuff… Good stuff lately, Cambrian. Enjoying this one and liking the other new ones thus far.

Blair Shirley

Whatever the so called 'Divine Justice' is, is gonna be what results in Marcus going "fuck you, destroying the church" ain't it

Juan

Lisanna: "So is my daughter coming home an Orc cumslut"? Elsenthia: "How dare you accuse me of something that I totally want to be true. I think you are just projecting much Mother". Lisanna:"How dare you accuse me of something I totally want to be true. How. Dare. You." Me:😆


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