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Breaking Providence Ch. 35 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-01-12 00:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Colin Love

I’m really diggin this story kinda shocked I didn’t find it till I subscribed

RanmaChaos

Thanks for another great chapter!

Anareth

Princess heads out to fight Roka-Ra without the hero, loses, and realizes "oh no she's hot." Maybe a two shot with the Pet princess watching her mistress fight the dark lord afterwards.

V01D

Seraphina has a talk with her prisoner, about the relationship Markus’s mother had

Cambrian

lmao, nah I just love the humor in misunderstandings and assumptions :P

Drake

Does the dark lord job have a Ainzlike ability that makes him seem like a genius all the time?

SpiritCrystal

Maybe maybe some side-arc hero thing for later? Hmm?

SpiritCrystal

Tame idea: Paladin Eric walking out of a hospital/church/whatever now fully healed from the battle, only to see everyone fucking panicking over the destined hero going AWOL with the gang.

Cambrian

That's fair heh

Cambrian

Yeah that's a planned omake I think heh

SpectralTime

Also, Erised and Angelica hanging out and snuggling while Erised cries about being an awful person and Angelica comforts her sounds up my alley. I don't necessarily get anything out of lesbian sex, so it doesn't have to go that far and I'm not sure whether or not they're actually attracted to each other so much as comfortable enough with each other and secure enough not to have hang-ups about sharing a boy, but their emotional closeness and intimacy is something I like. Besides, her loving friendship with Angelica is Erised's most likable quality, at least for me specifically.

SpectralTime

...Honestly, a Gral-Ra/Seraphina/I Forget The Dad's Name Actually Happy Threesome Ending isn't a bad pick for an Omake, but probably works best as a finale omake from a narrative perspective.

Kaijucifer

I would only be able to suggest omakes and whatifs after everything is over and I had time to back and reread so I can come up with what ifs

Cambrian

There's actually two Serafina POVs early on in Arc 3, but then there will be something of a drought of Serafina content for a little while yus

SpectralTime

For the record, I mostly thought of that stuff as stuff that could be summarized in a paragraph or two, and the rest of it could be a Serafina POV thing where they have happy rescue sex with one another and/or the Generals, just because I suspect we won't be getting much Serafina content for a while now...

Cambrian

Do you mean Roka-Ra talked to Seraphina? Or actual Gral-Ra? Because either way, don't fully get what you're envisioning tbh

Cambrian

lol glad you're enjoying it

Cambrian

Serafina: "Yes! Screw me more!" :V

Cambrian

Some good ideas here~

Cambrian

ehehehe

Cambrian

Definitely gonna have some Queen Omakes. There's a reason she doesn't have any POV chapters in the main story, but could do some POVs for her in the omakes for sure. As for that second idea, I'm mostly looking for single chapter pieces, so I'm not sure about that one, it seems way too long xD

Cambrian

Haha yeah, I'm sure this is just a couple bad eggs >.>;

Cambrian

lmao

Cambrian

lololol

Cambrian

Now that is a fun idea~

V01D

What if the Princess HAD gone with him? Or Gral-ra talked to Seraphina about Markus.

SpectralTime

Another potentially interesting idea... role reversal. Marcus was raised by orcs after Roka-Ra's jealousy led her to try to arrange the death of his father, to her eternal regret, and ended up being raised discriminated against by the other orcs, only to unlock his job as, to his horror, Destined Hero... but all the orcs are calling him "Dark Lord" for some reason! So they outfit him with a loyal assassin and a captured, seemingly-but-not-really mind-broken priestess who instead recognizes him as the Destined Hero and send him off to try to sneak-attack the Empire, but he'd disgusted by what they plan to do to the Pope who knew his dad, so he rescues her and goes on the lam with Serafina in Roka-Ra's place! Or something like that.

Joshua Kei

Me🤓

SylverIron

Not a milf....*yet*.

SylverIron

YAAAAY WE GOT ORC AUNTIE! Screw the church, and screw Serafina for fucking this all up in the first place by getting Marcus's Parents killed! The Hero-Lord shall rise!

Drakeulous

How about one where the orcess won the fight but realized the truth of his heritage during the fight. One where the princess went to confront the queen with Marcus. Maybe one where Marcus had another party member to his party. A paladin named Erica (gender bend of eric) to show him the ropes and teach him to fight. My final idea is one where Angelina was in charge of his orphanage where she was the one good thing his life until his awakening (he would still be bullied for being a half-orc and for being a teachers pet)

Oblivoni_Miche

So going down the list, lithe succubus, Holy Onee-san, and now Muscle Milf. Nice collection so far

SpectralTime

Omake idea huh? …I guess there’s the Queen imagining all the unholy things that orcish Destined Hero is doing to her sweet innocent daughter. We’ve never gotten a POV from her after all.

The Real

Oh how I wonder what the backlash of this is going to be. Friday can't come quick enough

Blair Shirley

I really hope I am looking too into things and that the Church doesn't normally use rape as one of its ways to handle those with 'evil' jobs.

SpiritCrystal

THEY MEH TEHK OWER LIVES, BUT THELL NEVAR TEHK, OUR 𝗠𝗨𝗦𝗖𝗟𝗘 𝗠𝗢𝗠𝗠𝗬!!!

TheSinful

"This here is MY muscle mommy of an Aunt! Ain't no one fucking her but me!"

Smile Dip

We could see a scenario where Tah-Mak-Ah has a particular...rite of submission as its finish, and Markus dominates the dark general on the battlefield


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