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Breaking Providence Ch. 36 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-01-14 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Looking forward to hearing what you think tonight then! As for this chapter being from Angelina's POV, tbh it was at least partially for me, to keep me from treating Marcus' party members too much like wall flowers and forgetting they exist

Juan

So much to say about the story, it's made me feel what's writers block is like. I'll probably wait for Seraphina's chapter tonight to express all my thoughts, but I'll just say the characters have been getting more interesting these last few chapters especially Marcus. Through I'm not entirely sure if it's intentional. As for some minor comments on the chapter, I don't think anything was truly gained from Angelina's perspective. I don't think being in her head for this chapter provided anything that we wouldn't have got without it. Other than the tibit of her not caring what happens to Seraphina.

KOS 1100

Happy days it just keeps getting better and better

Cambrian

Glad you liked that part. As for Angelina, we'll have to see, hmmm

Cambrian

Heh, interesting theorizing~

Drake

I like that he snapped, it makes him more... human? Personlike, that sounds better. Will Angelina grow out of idolizeing Markus? I think having someone who likes him for him, and not his jobs would do him some good.

Lord of Chromius

Yep, Roka-Ra is correct to seek out the other Dark Generals since Marcus's current effects of his Dark Lord job would certainly be the result of his mother's machinations alongside several of the oldest generals who assisted her in this project. In some ways, I'm getting God of War 4 & Ragnorak vibes since Marcu's mother reminds me of Faye (Krato's former wife and Altreus's mother). That is to say that while she loved her husband and her son, she still had her own agenda and plans for her son even if her husband would not have wholly agreed with it.

Cambrian

Hehe, she is pretty great isn't she?

Bellerophon

This just confirms that Angelina is by far the best waifu.

Cambrian

Hmmm, perhaps~

Cambrian

Glad you enjoyed it!

RanmaChaos

Thanks for another excellent chapter!

Kaijucifer

I can definitely see this turning out well. Perhaps Roka Ra will even be privy to Marcus bedroom habits with his two lovers, and might indeed become closer to Angelina than either of them thought through said habits?

Cambrian

She'll need it heh

Cambrian

Heh, always appreciate the speculation~

Cambrian

maybe a little bit of one :P

Cambrian

hehe yep

Cambrian

Yus

Orion9137

It'll be fun seeing Serafina's attempt at playing Game Master blow up in her face. Losing control of the Church, sending Marcus out without letting him know his origins, knowing demihuman/"bad job" enslavement is bad and doing nothing to stop it. All for it to end with the Destined Hero to bail out a Dark General. And an abandoned Princess to top it off. Good luck Serafina!

Nicholas Draper

I still think that there isn't a mistake, that he actually is both. I'm half convinced they're the same job anyway but with a translation error of the concept coming from the light and dark god/deity/system things that manages the jobs. Usually you'd have one for each group as they are fundamentally opposed to each other but Marcus can sort of straddle the line between them empathising with both and so there's no need for another of the job to appear. I'm probably way off base but this is why I love stories where we're as lost as the heroes, it makes for so many fun theories.

SylverIron

Hallelujah! Finally grown that Orcish backbone, huh Marcus?

SpectralTime

Angelina’s Care Bear Stares continue to be great. I don’t agree with the whole “things you do are above reproach because you’re the one doing them” thing, but you know, she’s a product of her culture and it’s only part of her reasoning besides.

GameJunkie999

Serafinas is gonna be in a very hard position now. With Marcus doing what he did (Even if it was to prevent something terrible) he's put her in a very dangerous position. Her status is compromised now, due to all the support she gave him, the Nobles are definitely gonna put more pressure on her and her faction. That not even mentioning the clergy


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