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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 2 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-01-18 16:19:31 +0000 UTC

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Zarroc789

Very interesting twist. Looking forward to more.

stephen lyman

I love the inclusion of Bellatrix in this I'm hoping we will see a Redeemed-but still Crazy Bella that is totally into Harry will Harry's inclusion in the Tri Wizard Cup allow him to become emancipated meaning he is Legally a Adult?

Kejmur

Yandere trope here could be an interesting way to write it.

MigratingCoconut

I like bellatrix so I’ll be interested to see where this goes

Cambrian

I've written lots of Weasley bashing on commission, but personally never had strong feelings one way or the other about the fanon idea of Dumbledore and the Weasleys being manipulative and opportunistic. Figured this time around I'd try out writing them more akin to their canon portrayal But TBH, Ron isn't going to be a major part of the story anyways I don't think. Harry and him did have a brotherhood in the future that no longer exists, but this Ron is too inexperienced to be of much use to Harry in his plans.

Darkanlan

A shame he decided to treat Ron like a brother. I've always felt that a back stabbing jealous little bastard that obviously became friends with you because you're famous is definitely someone you can do without in your life. The whole meeting the Weasleys bit always felt staged. Not to mention everyone gets introduced to the wizarding world by a teacher but he gets Hagrid. Too many setups there. Manipulative Dumbles and opportunistic Weasleys always seemed more accurate of the story to me.

The Rew

An apocalypse caused by Voldie would probably do the trick or a future that he won but started directing his attentions to "proper pureblood" wizards over half bloods or muggleborns after getting even more mad with power because he won. Thinking he is a god that can't die because without Harry able to kill him nothing else can because of the prophecy. I imagine that would probably turn one or two of them against him. I know at least one or two of them knew he was possible a half blood but there is no way some of them would have joined. I think Harry actually taunts Bella with that but she doesn't believe him.

dcguy3

Huh, never seen an idea like this before. You got me interested

Cambrian

Love the theorizing! Some if it I already had in mind, some of it I didn't but might use now, and some of it isn't quite what I'm planning, but still this is all great, thanks! xD

Dr.Scribe

Well seeing as we don't know what happened in the time that Harry came back to the 4th year from it's hard to pin down. Your references to that time make it sound not just voldemort war bad but like apocalypse bad. So I am thinking Bella survives the battle of hogwarts and is around during this new Armageddon fallout. This new threat is bad enough that everything falls, hence why Harry from his old mature years (at least past 40's if not closer to Dumbledore age) is so jumpy and fight or flight even knowing he was going back in time to fix it. Now the Voldemort threat is still deadly, things could change and he be caught unawares which is why among other reasons he chooses to stay in the tournament rather than allow current or future enemies see his hand and readjust. What drives them to be allies if not lovers though is trickier than putting an idea together about the timeline this harry's mind is from. My guess is Bella was always a bit of a obsessive and had a fetish for the powerful, which voldemort capitalized on and warped her through serious abuse like since her school years. He molded her a very powerful witch into a lapdog, and either early horcrux days or after breaking out of Azkaban and with the wizards version of Viagra made an heir (Delphi) who was still in needing of protection (magically cut off from/slowed time or magically delayed pregnancy idk) After Voldy's death she goes in to hiding to try and raise the girl to hate Potter and be his assassin/downfall. Then this narratives fire nation attacks and either slow or fast brought about a never ending fight for survival for Harry and the others on the "light" side. The threat either against all wizards or worse than deatheaters causes unlikely bedfellows after Harry saves Delphi's life. Eventually while being on the run and in hiding Harry uncovers how bad the abuse to make Bella this way. Also why we have the memory transfer spell like this was a mixture of Mature Harry Legimiense showing something was not right with Bella's Memories so he alters the spell so that he can pull an entire lifetimes of memories scrubbed of magical Tampering. They swap and he even shows he what was done to her. This breaks her back to almost school years pre recruitment Bella and Harry has to build her back up and this transfers her yandere focus onto Harry. But unlike Voldemort, Harry is a kinder healthier master even when he has to be harsh. Like Hell Voldemort ever did after care. What prompts the desperate attempt at time travel even though there are implied risks that might include death wasn't just the war against this awful threat but a time when Delphi was killed and in desperation the healed mother is broken and desperate again. So they find a way to send Harry back with the sadness that her daughter will not have been born, but also never have had a painful death etc, and maybe this go round if she has a kid it'll be with a less right evil bastard, and live in a happier world.

Tyler Gerich

Like the other commenters, I think that as long as Bella is still batshit insane and in character I wouldn't mind at all. I've always liked the stories that redeem her as long as they keep her in character. So far this story is really good and I'm excited to see where it goes

Cambrian

Hehehe, that's the sort of reaction I was going for! :P You guys will get some answers next chapter, though I'm interested in hearing any theories people might have. Damn it, should have put that in the closing AN...

Brandon Thomas Martinez

What I'm interested in, is what was so bad that Bellatrix even tried to help Harry in the past. Like is she truly redeemed, or has he obsession moved on to someone else? But again, what the hell happened that would make either Harry or Bellatrix work together?

Cambrian

Its start of Fourth Year, Sirius is already free

Drakeulous

While we are here we are freeing Sirius, right?

Cambrian

Hm, interesting point. She's definitely getting redeemed, but I appreciate the feedback regarding her personality and characterization. I definitely think you're right, she can't just suddenly be normal or 'fixed'. That would be taking away her agency.

Aidan Jones

As long as redeemed!Bellatrix is still absolutely batshit-crazy; I’m happy. Too many stories have an allied Bellatrix that they decrazy her and make her OOC.

Cambrian

The plan is definitely to show all that in chapter 3 yeah. We'll see what people think and I'll definitely be doing a Vibe Check after Chapter 4 to check and see if patrons want me to continue this or perhaps do something different heh

Kazama

As the first commenter said, Bella was batshit crazy from start to finish in her canon depiction. While I myself am not averse to a redeemed Bellatrix, (as in it won't take much to convince me) some peeps are probably going to want to see some form of how the redemption happened. As her current thought process here is along the lines of canon before her memories got transferred...at least I think they got transferred - AFAIK the memory strands are supposed to be copies xD - The point is that there's nothing hinted at to say that she's redeemable. Glad to have stuck around though, liking this so far!

Cambrian

Thank you for the feedback, heh, glad you're excited

adorsey

Redeemed Bella! Always love these stories!!! Great twist can’t wait to learn how it happened

Cambrian

Appreciate the feedback. I was honestly hoping it was a novel enough idea to get people interested, but with yours being the only comment I've gotten after an hour, I'm starting to think I've killed this story before it's even begun lol.

Orion9137

A shame we're getting the "ally Bellatrix" route. At least characters like Snape had a tiny amount of redeeming actions but Bella from start to finish was a basket case who gleefully cursed the Longbottom's to insanity among many other things during both wars. She was a true Death Eater through and through. Will be interesting to see where you go with this but I'm not on the edge of my seat.


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