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Endless Legacy Pt. 2 (DC Comics)

🕑 Added 2023-01-19 15:31:34 +0000 UTC

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Sonzofzsea

I know it is a bad idea but I kind of want him to give lex hair as a test or proof of a ability if needs be

Sonzofzsea

Lol why have you struggled so much why do you hunt for power and new ability’s . I want to make death cum good luck if anyone ask why your doing this with the lasso of truth on at lest normally could use a smaller answer instead of end goal

Alreadyhome

I'm liking the story so far. Kinda like the Parasite character, except he's just getting "maps" from his contacts. You mentioned a lack of Biomass...is he going to need to eat like the Benoist version of Supergirl until he gets caught up? Also, the comic book (sorry, Graphic Novel) publishers have already tromped all over that, so the things they do are usually called, as a way to joke around, "Comic Book Logic" or something similar. If you get negative comments, just give them that reply. After he meets the Kryptonians, couldn't he snag enough of a map to let him begin using sunlight to power his strengthening?

Nanaya7Nights

Lex doesn't seem like the type to tolerate competition of any kind. Best not to challenge him until Lucian gets his hand on some of Doomsday's DNA to give himself adaptive evolution.

Juan

Cool. Unfortunately I'm about to be at work so I'll just note some animals of interest. To start the Bullet Ant and Tarantula Hawk are some of the deadliest poisons known to mam. One sting capable of taking out a grown man. Flesh tentacles laced with the poison would allow Lucian to kill a man with slight cuts. Abalone shell is one of the toughest natural materials on earth. With scientist's looking to make armor out of it. If Lucian where to get knowledge of how to make it he could make his skin bullet resistant until a better option makes itself available. That's all I got for now, but more later.

Juan

Also I'm curious if it's going to be possible to bury the Hatchet with Lex. While I imagine readers are going to be cumping at the bits to get back at Lex, he would make a pretty powerful ally. Especially since the things needed to make Lucian a powerhouse are easily attainable by Lex. The ability to cooperate for greater mutual benefit is one of humanities greatest discoveries afterall and Lex, when he isn't flipping out over Superman, knows all about mutual benefit.

Cambrian

I will always be down to hear ideas haha

Juan

Also as someone who has played Prototype 1 and 2, both Darkness games, and the a for mentioned Superhuman, if you need ideas on what kind of animals and things Lucian would see out and make with his powers then I have plenty.

Juan

So Lucian has the powers of the Mc from Superhuman and unlike the Mc who while deceptively cunning isn't the brightest bulb,along with the sin of Sloth, Lucian is the son of the Smartest human man in DC and has every reason to be highly ambitious. Welp, it's a good thing this is placed in DC Comics and you don't have to worry too much about being overpowered in a porn story.

Kejmur

Brainwash Mercy. As the first final finger.

Marcus

Spread the kryptonite cancer further throughout his system! It won’t be a weird thing considering all his constant use and interactions with it and him always having a piece of it on him.

Blair Shirley

I am admittedly pretty dissappointed with biokinensis as the MC's power, as it is frankly too powerful in DC and will involve a lot of fake-sciencing, since comics use fake science for it as well lol, but oh well, democracy picking something I dont like isnt something Im not used to

Cambrian

Lol, its every two weeks just like all my other Story Polls. Basically every other Thursday

DJ Johnson

Already in love with this fanfic this one has to stay! That being said uhhh how many times a week we getting this baby? ;3

BomeranG

Touch Lex and fuck him up?

VincentVanNintendogh

Ohh, a loft goal to make Death cum! Love the title, fits perfectly! I can’t wait to see what this story has in store!

The Rew

Honestly I hope he sticks around Lex for a while to take over Lex Corp when he inevitable fucks up somewhere in his mindless pursuit of Superman. I don't really want our MC to be an outright punch 'em up hero but if a man as smart and influential as Lex had ever put even a tenth of the effort into solving problems as he does into trying to kill Superman then there wouldn't really be a need for him or any hero.

Collar Spider

I figured as much for the concession. It makes sense from the smut angle to get a woman asap but realistically I still lean towards just trying to pass mentally. Plus there's such a whole host of issues if he did suddenly blow Lex's expectations, that I'm not sure if winning Mercy would be worth it.

Cambrian

Part of it is that he never got the chance to grow up, basically. So even though he's lived for twenty-four years, he doesn't really have the mental development of a twenty-four year old. It can be hard to shake an abusive relationship like he has with his father, but definitely going to have plenty of opportunities for it to happen as the story goes on~

BRIAN

If he's going to pass both he could do the bet and force a handshake 🤝. That would give him access to a copy of Lexs brain.

Belly

Exactly, he should feel some kind of anger or even apathy towards him and maybe pretend to gain his approval so he can take over and strike Lex down, but his inner monologue just shows his inner child wanting his father's approval.

Talia Rock

I'm a little disappointed that the kid even cares to shoot for Lex's approval. Lucien clearly knows the character of his dad, knows clearly that he's a father in name only and yet a drive is still to make the bastard proud?? Parental abandonment, from my own wealth of evidence, leads more to hate, bitterness, and eventual detachment than anything else.

Pbc98

Because why fail on purpose, and challenging luthor for concessions? Yeah uhh that's probably a bad idea knowing him

Cambrian

Since it doesn't look like it'll win at this point, I'll tell you that I was thinking things like Lucien challenging Lex that if he exceeds his father's expectations, he gets Mercy as HIS bodyguard for a length of time or something. But would Lex even go for that, necessarily? And how would he react to the MC improving THAT much THAT soon? Hmmm, those would be questions I'd have to figure out answers to if you guys had gone the Challenge Route lol.

Cambrian

Yus

Cambrian

hehe, that's my secret, farming out the choices that convey the MC's intelligence to you guys :P That way if he's dumb, its all your fault, muwahaha!

Pbc98

Within reason seems the smartest option

MisterSunshine1029

I think Lucien should imply he had always been smart, but his poor health made it so that he couldn't apply himself properly; now that he is healthier (i.e. has started to pass Lex's super low standards for him and is showing signs he will improve) he can finally become a true son of Lex Luthor.

Biigoh

Look, even passing is going to be shocking.

Collar Spider

I'm here for mentaling succeeding, passing within reason, or really just finding what Cam means by concessions. Either way good start

Nasaguy

Let’s be reasonable here and pass it within reason so that we don’t draw attention to ourselves


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