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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 3 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-02-01 15:41:06 +0000 UTC

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JJnsyd

Very well done, genuinely unsettling. One of the most uncommon things I ever see in stories anymore (whether full books or stuff like this) is the ability to pull an emotion from the reader (me) so effectively. I very genuinely felt concern and fear of the future hinted at here!

Kejmur

Lynx. A beautiful and exotic choice ;).

Dr.Scribe

Alas can't seem to comment a reply in the thread from mobile app. But yeah fun idea. One I plan on using in my long retell I'm outlining. I would give you the description for Bela's form cause it might clench it for us who would prefer a dog. For this one I would say something cuddly elegant but can be threatening. Blue bay Shepard golden retriever mix? Easier to explain than a half housecat half Siberia tiger with inverted coloring

The Arn

I'm a little curious who survived in the dark future and who didn't and if any of them might try to follow Harry too stop him or help.

Cambrian

Yeah that would work too, will have to think about it. Either way, animagus idea is a good one!

SaintMichael95

I think a greyhound would be good.

Cambrian

Oh yeah, Big Cat might be good.

Dr.Scribe

just opinion based but cats are too fickle even with their person. She's striking be a at first rabid dog, and when "corrected" a loyal hound who would bite out the throat of anyone who crossed Harry. Plus she seems too dangerous for a cat or even a kneazle which animagi can't turn into. So if cat maybe part lynx or jaguar or even a black tiger with whit stripes. it would also fit with your references to dog like behaviors to her past self made it feel more of a fit. Also gives Harry something to be different about, and can you imagine her snarling at some girl or a douche approaching Harry or to pet her only for harry to have to correct her/train her. Added bonus for "this lil' bitch is my pet" kinda lines

Cambrian

Oooh, now that's an idea I'm definitely going to yoink xD Though hm, she doesn't feel like a cat? I would think Bella would feel a lot more like a cat than a dog. Then again, she IS a crazy bitch. Hmmm...

Dr.Scribe

Hope this becomes a long story for sure. wonder if Bella becomes a animagus to be his new pet at School curled up at the foot of his bed or in his lap in the common room. I would recommend large sized dog. Kinda paying homage to her once dead cousin and she doesn't feel like a cat...or a bird...and toads even dragon toads aren't sexy.

Dr.Scribe

could be a bj to HER completion and not her Masters and thus ends it with her wanting more to motivate to get jobs done quick and efficient, to do more later that night.

Dr.Scribe

In my head it makes sense to continue for a brief interlude. They are both stressed and need a release. Harry has a chance to be a less...demanding and more considerate master. This sets the town of their new future and any others that might join. So my vote is that he lets her have this relief and reset. Then take control and move to the next task. Sort of letting him even her out from a rabid attack dog at the end of her chain to a loyal hunting dog who can mellow out by the fireplace.

IAVL

Well, there's a Time for everything, but apparently this isn't one for long sex, so best get to it. Besides, Bella would love it either way.


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