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Swirling Chaos Ch. 3 (Naruto)

🕑 Added 2023-02-07 15:40:29 +0000 UTC

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Shadeymankey

A year late, still on my first read of this I am glad he goes this route. The academy would waste his time.

Marcus

All those things can be true! Even if one IS more true than the others.

Kejmur

Mei Terumi asking for arranged marriage from the get go, instantly charmed by Naruto-kun would be amusing. In those diplomatic trips I look forward Suna, especially hoping for still alive Pakura Kazekage. She's hot.

Cambrian

That's technically true, but not exactly an example of a Clan Head becoming a Jonin Instructor xD

Drakeulous

I think Asuma Sarutobi was head of his clan after his fathers' death and he was a sensei.

Dr.Scribe

I side with the Mikoto being main apprenticeship too almost gives the author free rein on making her character what he wants and still bringing in the other aspects and characters when fun

Dr.Scribe

interesting thought. If it is with his Hokage Mom that also opens up traveling for diplomatic missions and bringing in other village ninja...including the mists Mizukage Mei Terumi. I think she might have a fun competitive streak over a man hehehe hijinks.

Cambrian

Hmm, but that was 'back in the day' wasn't it? Do we get any 'modern' examples of Clan Heads taking on Genin Teams? It feels like by the time Naruto and his class graduate, it's not really the 'done' thing anymore. Like even with Minato, he was a Jonin Instructor and then a Hokage. For the 1st and 2nd Hokage, they were literally trying to make their dream a reality. For the 3rd Hokage, I'm not sure if he was Hokage yet when he took on his Genin Team. By the current time period, Konoha isn't nearly so desperate as it was back then, and there are enough things going on that most Clan Heads seem too busy.

SylverIron

Just cause the MILFs are on the table does not mean that they'll be unavailable later ya horny b------.

SylverIron

Now that's just smart thinking with clones.

Kat1017

The third Hokage was the head of the Sarutobi clan and he took a genin team, same with the first and second Hokages.

Cambrian

Its not quite like that in this case, this is more like Jiraiya/Naruto's three-year trip as an apprenticeship, though instead of taking place after Naruto had his time with Team Seven it takes its place

SpectralTime

Y'all're a buncha Oedicons. Is that the word? If it's not then I'm coining it now. Oedicons. Not least 'cause no matter what, Naruto will have a close relationship with his mom by virtue of her being his mom, and this is abandoning a perfectly good opportunity to get in good with the Lady Uchihas and/or the kids in class.

Kingtombs456

I'm looking at the apprenticeship stuff like I would a clan thing, like Shikamaru, Ino, Or Shino. They still have to go to the academy and have a team...but most of their training will be through the clan/apprenticeship.

Malthus

I mean, outside of Moegi and Hanabi, what other females his “age” would he be able to woo in the academy? MILF apprenticeship ftw.

Malthus

Learning the Rasengan via Shadow Clone training wheels support until mid-Shippuden.

V01D

Because Biju takeover - means it’s effectively Kurama’s Shadow Clone

Cambrian

She's a Clan Head, she's not going to take on a Genin Team heh. Offering Naruto an apprenticeship was actually Kushina's idea for Mikoto to do when Naruto originally turned down her offer for one, though obviously Naruto doesn't know that.

Cambrian

Honestly gonna probably be winging it, but definitely OP

Kat1017

Not if you make Mikoto his team sensei when he graduates from the academy

Kejmur

I still think that GenJutsu idea could be a fun way to completely do something different with Naruto. With Kitsune (Kurama here) being natural tricksters, and illusion specialists.

Dr.Scribe

I wonder what areas of skill this Naruto had branched out to. Fuiinjutsu, rasengun, combat, sage etc...but are we going fully skilled OP time reversal, or Really good at what he was good at and working on the areas he didn't have time or patience enough to learn before? ie what level of wool over the eyes is he going to be doing while being back here and almost resetting his foundations?

Dr.Scribe

It is still a hard decision any way you slice it. you have the being with peers, or being with either on or both of the mother figures that would have been denied due to death previously (I think Mikoto and Kushina were friends so you know she would have wanted to adopt Naruto if there were no coup and Hiruzane had let her) Both are also quite busy with being head of clan and police force as well as Hokage... My two cents, if either apprenticeship is chosen the other helps take up the slack so work can be done in their day jobs and also allows for guest lecturers and team mission compositions that an academy ninja might not get...Kurenai Yuhi could get him better at genjutsu which probably still wasn't in his wheelhouse in the timeline he came from. Also criminally under represented in the fiction world in my opinon

V01D

Training with Kushina is definitely going to involve more Kurama than the other two options - for one, she’s ALREADY seen her but also because Kushina is the one who is most skilled/knowledgeable to handle her. Kushina could even create an excuse to let Kurama be able to show up publicly.

Kejmur

Well, it could be a pretty fun way to tease Naruto in a lewd way, with some mean masturbation techniques she does on the side, to 'encourage' him to spend more 'time' with her.

Cambrian

Option 3 is sort of already this choice. Naruto will have plenty of interactions with Kushina and Mikoto is he sticks to his guns. However, it wouldn't exactly be fair for him to have two official apprenticeships AND a place on a proper Genin Team at the same time. Option 3 would make any training he did with Kushina and Mikoto on the side more unofficial, basically.

Cambrian

I hadn't actually thought about the mechanics of it, but yes, that sounds sort of right lol. Except Naruto doesn't get her memories when she pops, so I dunno.

Kat1017

Couldn't you take a fourth route and do all three options at once he continues the academy but also becomes the apprentice to both his mother and Mikoto, seeing as Kushina is the Hokage she is quite busy managing the village.

Kejmur

Not a female Uchiha, one of the named ones, like I speculated? Where Kushina would do it as a sign of trust towards the clan. Unless of course it's still a surprise and only a partial reveal ;). Also, Kurenai wasn't a thing, although Genjutsu specialist with Naruto is a unique choice. Also, I read a few GenJutsu Naruto stories in the past (I think 3-4), but GenJutsu Naruto is very rare for lots of reasons. It would be an interesting path, not gonna lie. Most likely 'encouraged' by a foxy trickster like Kurama.

V01D

Kurama is totally using a combination of Shadow Clone & Biju Takeover, isn’t she? After all, a Shadow Clone is a lot closer in makeup to a Biju, being a Chakra Construct - meaning it’s easier to reshape to the appropriate form. (I have an idea for a Warring Clans era SI - rather than join up with a clan I’d focus on the biggest victims of Zetsu’s manipulations; the Biju. Also, the reaction everyone would have to referring to ‘the Kyubii’ as Fluffy-sama would be priceless. The reasoning is to respect how Knowing Kurama’s Name Is Special, while still not using his title - making people acknowledge him as a person. Kurama would have a Little Version he’d, who people think is a Summon, helped along by ACTUAL Fox summons.)

Cambrian

Hanabi is definitely one of your teammates if you go with the Academy Option, and then one of the female Jonin like Kurenai or Anko would probably be your squad leader. Likely Kurenai since I don't remember if she showed up in The Rise of Uzumaki or not.

Kejmur

Sticking with Academy. I agree that Kushina's apprenticeship doesn't fit Naruto's character at all. He doesn't go with the 'easy way out'. Also, academy option would deny us potential teammates like Hanabi, and I'm VERY curious about who we would end up with.

KOS 1100

Hmmmmm okay those are hard choices. 🤔

Cambrian

Can't speak for those voting, because I'm sure their reasons mostly boil down to "more time with MILF" but my personal take on why Naruto might change his mind now is that there's no real chance of him getting the Team Seven from his past timeline back together, so he might as well avoid team dynamics altogether. Plus apprenticeship might give him more freedom to do his own thing.

SylverIron

Doesn't feel right, taking an apprenticeship. I mean, this is Naruto we're talking about here, when has he taken an easy path?


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