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Lightning Strikes Twice Ch. 4 (Harry Potter)

🕑 Added 2023-02-15 15:46:51 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

Simple tasks are definitely in her wheelhouse. Sending her on short missions won't ever have a possibility of failure. However, leave her to her own devices for too long and she might start getting... Ideas

Cqys

I don't particularly enjoy such an insane Bellatrix that she can't be trusted with simple tasks. Bellatrix had some screws loose but she was always quite capable. You'd think being with Harry would, I dunno, straight the screw a bit? If she's not capable of doing tasks without her hand being held she's an utterly boring attack dog. She should be a right hand... Not a house elf. My opinion anyway.

RanmaChaos

Thanks for another good chapter!

stephen lyman

Is their anyway to De-age Bella to the same age as Harry that way she could walk around without trouble

DualEquinox

If you lean into Fanon a little, a second pet is easily justified. Purebloods can't be using school owls to carry potentially sensitive information to their families, right? Who knows how often they are checked for charms and mail redirects after all. I imagine that those from a Noble House or whatever, are allowed an "official house courier" in the form of an Owl (One that is probably laden with House Magic to ensure it can't be intercepted) in addition to the pet that actually counts. It would make sense if you are choosing to lean into that whole side of the Fanon and making Hedwig a Courier of House Potter instead of his official pet might also offer certain legal protections against her being intercepted, redirected or mail she carriers otherwise tampered with, which is a plus.

Dr.Scribe

Just a quick search showed me that most unofficial answers fluctuate between only 1 pet, 2 pets, or one of each on the list at Hogwarts. Dailyprophet.net it is 2. Argument can be made the Owl is a work animal and the others are just pets...so an owl and one of the others might be approved easy

Dr.Scribe

hmm on the fence on which way to go...just like I am in a similar for the story I am writing where a opportunity for a broken Bella to either hide at school like that or out in the wizarding world...for this story I lean more towards at school. sending her on select missions makes sense but keeping her there to stabilize and reaffirm she didn't hallucinate those memories and is actually still at Azkaban makes sense. Plus it will allow for a fun interplay between Harry from Future and mending Bella's outlook, world view and attitude against those from the "now" filled with less pragmatism more optimism. It will allow the characters from now to develop some of that grit and such now and for them to temper just slightly some of the ruthlessness future Harry had to adopt.

Dr.Scribe

or just petition to McGonagall for the pet with a sob story about finding her lost or smacked by the womping willow and he was nursing her back to health in secret...that last part isn't even untrue just mental health"

Void Walker

and she DOES give him a lot of "emotional support" as is... she just did in fact... XD. And thank you again for the chapter i can't wait to see more of your work!

Cambrian

I mean, the wards never detected Peter Pettigrew, Sirius Black, or Rita Skeeter, so no they do not detect animagi. By this point Harry does in fact have the Marauder's Map. As for having more than one pet, might have him lean on his status as a Triwizard Participant to make her his 'emotional support animal' or something lmao

Void Walker

Amazing chapter...! but i have a few questions... First is, Do the wards in hogwarts detect animagi? Could dumbledor sense bella through those wards? or is that part of them shut off? as with sirius if that was done or if dumbles just ignored him? Second would be when she is in hogwarts does he have the map (harry)? also can harry even have more then one "pet"? he has hedwig who is commonly thought as his familiar... how will he explain bella? are there rules against multiple?


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