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Vibe Check: Peter Parker's New Groove
🕑 Added 2022-11-06 15:25:29 +0000 UTCHey guys, half a year ago I did one of these Vibe Checks for The Sleeping Dragon, and ever since I've been wondering if I should just bite the bullet and do one for every single one of my eight currently running Patreon Exclusive Stories.
Consider this the first of eight, with each taking place right after the story has updated over the next two weeks. If you missed the latest chapter of Peter Parker's New Groove, make sure to go read it!
Now, these won't each be identical to one another. For instance, Playing the Game is already nearing the end of it's natural life span, so that Vibe Check will be more focused on what comes next.
That said, this one is gonna be pretty standard. Are you guys currently enjoying Peter Parker's New Groove? Are you enjoying Peter as a protagonist still?
Or has it all gotten stagnant and rote and you want a change of some sort?
For instance, an idea of what might replace Peter Parker's New Groove could be a Mutant OC story more focused on the X-Men, but with plenty of other Marvel characters as well. It'd probably still be a Harem Fic, but no longer with Peter as the focus but a completely OC character.
I didn't used to think OCs were all that popular or good, but considering my Star Wars story A Perverted Galaxy Far Far Away somehow became my most popular Patreon Exclusive, I'm opening my eyes to the idea more and more.
If done right, I think an OC would do well in the Marvel Universe. But obviously, I want to know what you guys think.
THAT SAID: The above is just a single idea off the top of my head. I cannot confirm that it would be the actual new story to replace PPNG if you guys voted to wrap it up.
Please vote for one of the two options down below so I know what to do with the Marvel slot going forward.
Also happy for all feedback in the form of comments on PPNG. What do you like about it? What do you dislike about it? How do you think I can improve in the future, whether it continues on or gets replaced by a new Marvel fic.
Comments
dcguy3
I really like this series but I do understand people wanting it to be wrapped up for something else to take its place. Perhaps some sort of in between where PPNG isn't a weekly thing but something every 2 to 3 weeks, with a newer series being weekly. Just an idea
Ken Keay
To be honest PPNG is the only story of yours I'm currently following on your Patreon thread. I like some of the Potter and DC or Marvel themed stories you've produced, but do not follow most of the other fandoms in which you write.
TV
I like it, but I think that it's becoming stagnant without an overarching goal or mission In Peter's admittedly long victory lap. I'd like to see it continue, but I can see why people feel the way they do.
SiriusSmut55
Love the story and hope it continues. Would also love to see an OC marvel story in the future
SharpShooter345
I like it, if it does end I hope all of the ladies have full wombs and milk filled breasts. Wouldn't mind a spidergwen vs female doc ock or venom infected female doc ock or fem venom from the new movies
adorsey
Hopefully it stays with Parker!
Cambrian
Understandable, thank you for your feedback!
JBurton
It was the party arc itself. Like you said, it dragged on way too long and I was never able to get back into the story after that.
Cambrian
Appreciate that. Hopefully if I do end up replacing it with a new Marvel story its one that you like as much as PPNG!
StarBoyYem
I really like PPNG and where it is
Cambrian
Yeah I'll probably hold a vote to decide if the next story will be an OC or a Peter Parker fic again. As far as a long form story with a female protagonist, I'm just not sure it would be popular enough tbh. Even if the idea of Wonder Woman enjoying her defeat fetish with a ton of guys is hot to me, I think the majority of readers prefer a male protagonist they can relate to as the main lead of the story
tornadoboy
Yeah i think he's set for an ending at this point. A fresh Peter story with like a new focus, like something to do with a symbiote maybe, would work. Or an entirely new long form story works too. Lots of characters across both the MCU and DC. Out of curiosity have you ever considered writing a long form story similar to that choose your bad end story type deal? Instead of a dude with a harem, maybe someone like Wonder Woman fucking her way through the male heroes and villains type of deal?
Cambrian
Fair enough, heh. Was it the Party Arc itself that made you lose interest, or the Party Arc coming to an end? I do feel like the Party Arc itself dragged on way too long but still want to confirm
Cambrian
I appreciate the feedback and blunt honesty. The thing about the HP SI with the Fem!Harry was that was a commission heh, so I don't control that. Commissioner got tired of it and moved on, basically. But I have been trying to do more plot heavy stuff in the past year or two on Patreon as well.
Cambrian
Well I'm glad you've enjoyed it all this time. At the very least it's had a good long run and I am intending for it to at least get to 50 chapters I think even if I do wrap it up
Cambrian
I'm glad to hear that, though unfortunately it seems you'd be in the minority. Hopefully whatever I'd end up replacing it with would still interest you tho!
Cambrian
Hmm, I'm actually considering doing a DC story all on its own starting in 2023. As for Wolverine, I'm not sure if he lends himself to being the MC all that well. I feel like his popularity is beginning to wane...
JBurton
Honestly, I lost interest in this story at the Party arc.
Grafian
Eh this story didn't really do it for me tbh. You're a great writer and I get the focus on a lot of lewds, as that's probably just what people will pay for? Still I miss the more plot heavy stuff you've written. I really loved your HP SI with the bicorn dude and fem!Harry? Great story, good balance in terms of lewd/plot ratio, still sad that one died. Admittedly the last bit with the whole mind maze/bicorn-ification was getting a little out there, but it was still pretty damn interesting!
Fenrir44
Peter Parker's New Groove is on of your better marvel stories and to just end it seems wastfull to me
adorsey
I would really miss this story!
Mimicry
Maybe story with Wolverine as main character focused on female mutans or you can try with DC story
