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Breaking Providence Ch. 12 (Original)

🕑 Added 2022-11-19 00:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

truuuue.

SpectralTime

I mean, ya know, the bombshell nun with a good heart and a good head on her shoulders *is* probably gonna be right about things more often than the bitter, misanthropic professional murderer. No need for false equivalence here!

Cambrian

Haha, she'll be wrong eventually. Probably. At some point /shrug lmao

Cambrian

It is indeed someone we haven't met just yet~ hoping you guys like her!

SpectralTime

Angelina’s so great. I should be counseling you to make his “good Angel“ wrong at least some of the time, since it’s not like she isn’t also giving him lots of hot sex, but I like her so much I genuinely don’t want that, so I don’t know.

Azra

Solid first Arc I'd say, I wonder who's POV the next chapter will be in. A part of me says Serafina, but another part says it's someone we haven't met.

Cambrian

Glad you're enjoying that, happy the main theme is landing so well xD

I'm a big fan of him being both dark lord and chosen one. It's created an interesting dichotomy The symbolism from union of his parents with the potential union of the church and "dark forces" is also real cool. Can't wait for more!

Cambrian

Hehe, glad to hear it!

Kaijucifer

That's my hero, lmao. Marcus getting a little more confident with each passing chapter. I can't wait to see who he will grow into

Cambrian

lmao, yus v.v

Cambrian

He should, you're right. Will he though? Nah he's getting thrown in the deep end :V

Bellerophon

Guess they’re quite literally the angel/devil sitting on his shoulder offering advice lmao.

RanmaChaos

Good chapter. In addition to getting his stuff, Marcus should get some training in the use of his halberd. Real experience is the greatest teacher, but some formal lessons from the start would be a really good idea.

Jack Reaver

Another great chapter! I'm glad that he's going to carve his own path, probably somewhere down the middle. His girls are a good dichotomy, and he has an opportunity to possibly fight evil and corruption in the church. Both of his... advisors, for lack of better words, are loyal to him than anything else it seems, so it might be fun to see both be a little corrupted from their original ideals. They also seem to give great insight into the rival sides of conflict. Anyway, sorry to write so much, but can't wait for Monday!

Cambrian

Haha yeah, Marcus POVs will return with Arc 2, not to worry about that xD

Cambrian

I'm so happy to hear that I made a true believer out of you! xD Hope I continue to impress

Kyo Amamoto

as long as its only marcus' last chapter this arc and not for the whole work this is not a problem.

Bob Miller

You go Marcus, your job doesn't define you, you define your job! In all seriousness, I'm loving this so far. I wasn't sure about this original work at first, but I have never been more happy to be proven wrong.


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