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The World, His Oyster (Evangelion)

🕑 Added 2022-11-25 15:48:25 +0000 UTC

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Colin Peden

Okay, I love this so far, but honestly, why did you stop with just one chick for the first chapter?

Colin Peden

You and me both.

Kaijucifer

Fantastic. I envy Shinji here. Always loved Misato.

Zitronen tee

Amen brudda. The lewd must flow.

Cambrian

When canon gets in the way of lewd baby making... it is no longer canon /nodnod

Razgriz0x

I know this is just a story... bit one small nitpick that you're probably going to hear from the more hard-core Evangelion fans. Misato can't have children. The wound she took at 2nd Impact destroyed her uterus. She is barren, thus the reason for her scar and the reason she agrees to become Shinji's caretaker (Wanting to be a mother). Other than that, noice. Shinji could use his 'Free Pass' on Rei to make her more loyal to him and more emotive, give her a true sense of self and self-preservation. On Asuka, make her realize that Kaji is a baby-weiner haver and that Shinji is a real man. Steal Ritsuko from his dad, help Maya Ibuki realize she's Bi and put something else up Hikari's (Class Rep) ass instead of that rule following stick.


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