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Vibe Check Pt. 2 (Naruto)
🕑 Added 2022-11-29 15:56:33 +0000 UTCAlright guys, you have spoken. The vast majority of voters said they wanted me to wrap up The Rise of Uzumaki and replace it with a new Naruto story so that's what I'm going to do.
To be honest, it's actually a relief in one way... I hated the title 'The Rise of Uzumaki' from pretty early on, but not early enough to be able to change it. It should have always been Rise of the Uzumaki, and I actually found myself constantly writing it that way and then having to fix it afterwards.
Not sure what I was thinking when I originally named it The Rise of Uzumaki, but hopefully whatever the next Naruto story ends up being, the title won't constantly scratch at the back of my brain like a bad itch I can never reach.
I also never liked that I named the female version of Sasuke as Sasuko. Satsuki would have been so much better and if I genderbend Sasuke again, I'll use Satsuki going forward.
ANYWAYS! Here's a few Naruto story ideas. Bare bones of course, because I'm still working out the details. Feel free to give feedback and suggestions for all of them.
1. Time Travel Naruto - Unlike the Harry Potter idea, I don't have a specific time in mind yet for this one. Could have him travel back to Warring Clans Era, his parents' era, or even his own timeline. That would be a secondary vote if this option won I think.
2. Male OC with genderbent main cast - Male OC alongside all of the usual squads with Naruto and Sasuke genderbent of course. However, what I don't know for sure yet is whether to make the Male OC a Konoha Genin or make him a Missing Nin or something else. This would also have a secondary vote if the option won to decide where the Male OC comes from/where he's starting.
3. AU Naruto - This one is a bit more fleshed out, but basically its the ninja/characters from Naruto set in an Alternate Universe that's more cyberpunk/modern with all that that entails. Rather, it's not that much more fleshed out but there probably isn't a secondary vote to be had here lol.
4. Someone Else MC - Basically choosing another character besides Naruto to be the Main Character of the story. Someone like Sasuke, Jiraiya or Zabuza were a few ideas bandied about on the previous Vibe Check. If this idea wins, we'll have a secondary vote to decide which character is going to be the main character. Probably genderbend Naruto in most cases.
As always, happy for any suggestions on how to improve any one of these ideas (especially whichever one is clearly winning lmao)
Comments
That black guy
Funny enough there's a short lived manga that's basically cyberpunk au Naruto called Tokyo Shinobi Squad , which has a blonde blue eyed haired unorthodox ninja who has a ramen tab and lives in a crime filled version of Tokyo
Kejmur
Pretty much how I see it myself. Either Kushina's generation (so he is the same age as her) and possibly takes over Team 7, or the Kakashi generation, where he ends up on Team 7 Obito himself. Naruto-Fem Obito-Rin would be a pretty unique dynamic.
Kat1017
Time travel with genderbending of other male characters like Minato, Jiraiya, Obito, Kakashi, and Orochimaru to name a few.
Keeper
If Time Travel has to be the winner, I’d say go back to when his mom was a teen. That way we can still have some fun with Kushina, Mikoto, Tsunade etc as prepwork for what comes later(maybe even going down and killing Madara before Obito ever meets him)before maybe time skipping to the modern age with middleaged Naruto(maybe should rename himself Menma?)enjoying the new generation while trying to stop Akatsuki(now with a different goal just following Pain instead of secretly being lead by Obito)and Orochimaru
Kejmur
And another way to do it. Team 7 with Obito and others end up with Naruto as sensei instead of Minato that may be female. In this AU Naruto deals not only with his student brats, but also crushing for him Fem Minato, too horny Kushina, and yandere Mikoto. Naruto, the most wanted bachelor of 3rd Shinobi War. Also it opens up lewd student-teacher relationships and still give us teenage versions of canon characters like Kurenai or Anko.
Kejmur
Sannin Era could be interesting as well. Most likely genderbent Pro (and comedy of why Snake Bastard is do hot, lol), keep Jiraiya the same (having bro friendship is nice to have) and it would be a nice return to previous fic where Naruto and Jiraiya had a sex scene together. And Naruto corrupting Jiraiya is just funny. And Tsunade - we know how it would go. Teenage Tsunade in anime was in fact cute.
SpectralTime
Well, it’s doomed, but I’ll vote for my idea anyway!
Chalo Guerrero
Would love to see a Shikamaru mc fic with him being the tactician and his harem doing his bidding. It would be totally believable if he took over the village being it's hidden overlord or something.
Cambrian
Haha yeah, I appreciate that <3
Dr.Scribe
Fair. I guess just take the compliment on your skills as a writer
Cambrian
TBH, I'm not really a fan of genderbending as a plot point/fetish. I much prefer when they were just always like that and its an AU.
Dr.Scribe
Here's my proposition for the Male OC/Genderbent main cast. experimenting with either the Sexy no jutsu or a curse/virus constructed by another village with Orochimaru's help is converting some of the main cast and the OC's direct insertion of Chakra to their female core could be found to stabilize them. insert plot points of fighting or accepting, looking for cure, internal fight with self to accept role on either side of the pairing etc. But I think you have the chops to pull it off and not have it just be a oops all female village kind of story. If we go with anything else Naruto or even this concept I think we are overdue for some good Kurenai Yuhi content and maybe some of the Inuzuka clan
Kejmur
I would prefer 4, but I don't see it happen winning, so let's go with 1. While I like the idea of Kaguya time, an issue is that there aren't many named characters, and especially in a porn-heavy story, we want named characters to be lewded. So I would say Kushina/Mikoto/Minato generation (some characters may be gender-bent), lewding them, and at one point time skip to something close to the canon timeline? Why? So we get as many named lewd targets as possible.
Ome Kruger
With the male oc you could make him a member of the akatsuki and have him slowly take over the organization
Marcus
It’d be cool for him to time travel back to before Kaguya took the fruit and take it for himself, then he can either take her or leave her and use his new powers to find another (better) universe to explore. Being honest the further back in time he grid the less hot women there are for him, unless you intend to make a LOT of OC’s, and the FUTURE is just a horrible, horrible place.
