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Coming of Age Ch. 13 (Percy Jackson)

🕑 Added 2023-06-19 14:10:12 +0000 UTC

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Lamp

What if we got both in cute blue maid uniforms for a week?

SlayingHurdle72

(the words that just came out of "his" mouth.) should be "her" mouth. And (closing the cabin door behind "him" as her eyes narrow) should be behind "her".

Darendarus

Annabeth seems to like assuming things about Percy. I wonder when that's gonna bite her?

Kael Hyun

I say if she wants to be involved she had best convince Clarisse Because otherwise she joins Clarisse for the remainder of it

Collar Spider

True, but if as his slave he can do whatever he wants with her. I don't think Annabeth should be able to just order her around without his permission. Although, it was really hot how she just strode in there and starting making out with him. It's good writing, nice job Cam

Smile Dip

Looking at the original bet, it was kinda between just Percy and Clarisse. Percy is probably within his rights to let her in on it if he wants, but just assuming she was already in seems rude.

Collar Spider

I do think Annabeth has a bit of a stake in this, it was her plan that won the game. But clearly people don't think she should have it outright.

Nanaya7Nights

Annabeth needs to start explaining herself inst ad of just assuming that Percy will do what she plans. I think they already had this conversation regarding the "Capture the Flag", seems like they need to have it again about their personal lives and the nature of their relationship.

Hadrian v.E.

Yeah, hell no. Percy needs to tell Annabeth politely, but firmly, that she has no business between his and Clarisse's business. If she finds him getting abusive, then by all means, castrate him; otherwise, don't let her do a power move by proactively inserting herself between consenting individuals.


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