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Vibe Check: Swirling Chaos
🕑 Added 2023-02-21 15:45:50 +0000 UTCHere we are with the first of my two new anime fics!
With Chapter 4 just going live (go read it if you haven't yet) and next time being the release of Chapter 1 to the public, let me know if you think Swirling Chaos deserves to continue on down below.
Also, let me know what you're liking about the story so far, what you're not liking about the story so far, AND what you want to see going forward in this story. Won't deny it, been leaning on you guys a lot for these early chapters of pretty much all six of my new stories. Your ideas might not all make it into every fic, but having your feedback still means the world to me.
Anyways, that's all I've got to say. Fingers crossed that Swirling Chaos continues to entertain for some time to come!
Comments
Basilisk Basilisk
I am enjoying all of the new fics you started, one thing I enjoy about this is how different it is, you didn’t put a version of naruto who just fucks, there seems to be real plot and so far I am enjoying it.
Cambrian
Some crossovers would be fun, but alas the majority of my Harry Potter and Naruto audiences don't seem inclined to vote for them over just straight HP and Naruto fics lol. Some of my favorite fics are crossovers though, so we'll see what the future holds~
Kejmur
To be fair I think it may also connect with Naruto being almost as popular fanfiction-wise as Harry Potter. I think at this point it had almost every kind of storyline. In this case, I think doing a crossover would do the trick next time around. If it happens that is.
Cambrian
Glad you're enjoying that! Yeah, I don't know for sure why the patrons got tired of The Rise of Uzumaki, but I know I was feeling a bit aimless with it. This fic promises to be something different at least... though only time will tell if it's also GOOD lol.
Kejmur
And I appreciate how wildly AU it is. If it was canon compliant, in a timeline we know, it would feel repetitive. Also, the question would return again - why even bother with dropping the previous story, if the canon timeline would be similar in this one as well? Although again, if we would end up with Peggy Sue time travel, I would be fine with it, as long as it's not a canon timeline.
Kejmur
The funny thing about it is that in anime (I did check it) Kushina's... tits sizes... vary. Yes, they vary. Sometimes she's very flat, and sometimes she's pretty busty. In porn art most of the time she is busty, but sometimes (like with a porn artist aarokira) she's completely flat, and yet she's so hot.
Cambrian
Understandable, can't please everyone. Thanks for voicing your opinion!
Cambrian
Appreciate the feedback!
Cambrian
Naruto is not shota, so no
Wojciech Pypkowski
Honestly... of the new ones I only read this one and the HP one and I have feeling that while both have nice plot/idea they are too slow paced to my liking. I mean... narrativly the 4 chapters of this one seem like just one chapter that have been forcibly chopped into few and it's similar for the HP one.
Kage_at_Fap
I'm liking it, but I want more visualization for the characters. What is Kushina wearing for example what does body look like? Is she petite or voluptuous? Is this going to be shota content? With the girls being chunin?
BomeranG
Too AU to even count as Naruto at this point. Sorry but it's not for me.
