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Breaking Providence Ch. 55 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-02-28 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Colin Love

Even though the work is long finished I’m keeping myself from getting spoilers and enjoying the hell out of this story. Suppose there’s no need to spell out my thoughts on what comes next. None the less I’m posting to give my seal of approval.

RanmaChaos

Thanks for the chapter!!

SpiritCrystal

So this is a Pennywise fic?

SpectralTime

And yet, all I can think of is one of those huge hulking suits of animated armor holding an hilariously prissy little knife and cutting up dainty finger sandwiches. I will say that, as I forgot to respond to last time but meant to, those all felt like situations with the two powers being used in concert, not indicators that they were always intended to serve as complementary parts of a whole. I would’ve preferred something that was more explicit about the one covering for obvious weaknesses in the other.

SpectralTime

I agree.

Phraxius

I reckon it's the Queen, personally. The Elves are clearly deeply entangled with whatever is going on.

Kaijucifer

Time that her holiness spills the damned beans!

Brandon Thomas Martinez

So she stated ‘It’ would be mad if she overstepped her bounds. I always wondered what powers the System of Light and Dark jobs, but I think we’re about to find out. My guess is either the world itself or some god-like entity. Though it makes me wonder if the Holy Empire was a failed experiment at making a perfect world separating ‘good’ and ‘bad’ people. Can’t wait to find out!

tornadoboy

Ah yeah that's why I wasn't surprised. I was trying to recall the specifics. And it's fine. It's a surprise for Marcus not the readers. It's still a major moment and really well done

Cambrian

TBF it wasn't really even foreshadowed, I outright told you guys everything Marcus learned this chapter back in Chapter 3 in Serafina's very first POV xD Probably could have saved it, but I wanted to have Serafina be a POV character in this fic, and it wouldn't have made much sense for her to be yandere for Marcus without explaining WHY she was yandere for Marcus... that being his dead dad was the previous Destined Hero xD

tornadoboy

I will admit, this part I saw coming. Them being his parents and Marcus being the son of both was foreshadowed pretty heavily so it's not a shock. Ditto for the church being their likely killer. But it's still an interesting set of revelations.

Cambrian

Yus, in this case it was indeed both Jobs. Though not all is quite as it seems even now~

Cambrian

Camilla is fun~

Cambrian

You shall find out soon!

Inirlan

I was 50-50 between him having both and both jobs being the same job viewed through the prism of different identification spells. (With Marcus getting dark lord info being a mix of orcish blood and his upbringing)

Smile Dip

You know what, I like this lady. I wanna see where this goes.

Kyo Amamoto

I had a feeling it was both jobs... but them agreeing to tear the system down, that was a thought that came up as I read. though the reasons why the sytem needs to go should be interesting to find out.


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