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Breaking Providence Ch. 56 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-03-02 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Kaijucifer

I vote they get punished for their transgressions. Put an end to the church and send her snooty stuck up mother packing. Do what the Dark Lord must do and cleanse the slate. Break Serafina. Imprison Lisanna. Invade the realm of the "High Elves" and take them all down! Or, that's what I'd do lol. It's time Marcus actually does some shit a "Dark Lord" would do, for the most part he's been a hero bordering on antihero.

RanmaChaos

Wow! Great chapter, thanks!

Cambrian

I'm glad you recognized the Princess' second protag status, even if it was late. That was definitely the vibe for Elsenthia that I was going for =)

SpectralTime

Oh, and I did briefly wonder whether or not there enemy was more of an exterior force that had a personality that might be influencing Serafina, but I guess that would in some senses do a disservice to your characterization work of her learning all the wrong lessons from what happened last time. I do still hope her soul can be saved mind.

Cambrian

Yus, next chapter will reveal even more stuff~

SpectralTime

On one hand, we the audience know, more even than Serafina herself, that the Shadow goaded her into some of her worst impulses. Not saying that the pope isn’t ultimately still responsible for her actions, just that some people fall from grace and some people get pushed. Even if the popes shadow is ultimately attempting to engineer an end to the system, she’s still being a nihilistic accelerationist about it. But on the other hand, as someone who wishes she joined the hero’s party, I appreciate the princess is effectively a second protagonist, something I only recognized far too late. I’m still left wondering whether or not her mom has caught feelings for the pope, given how strongly she reacts at the suggestion that allying with her was wrong. And there are still some questions, like what form things like magic and religion talk before the template device was found. After all, the designated “bad guys“ still ultimately get their powers from the same source.

Smile Dip

Wait, I'm an idiot. The story is called "**Breaking** Providence". Of *course* the end goal here is to break the doctrine over it's own back.

Smile Dip

Hmmm. I don't know what the grand direction overall is going to be, but it sounds like the letter of the Doctrine could be fulfilled if Marcus killed himself. I also don't think that's where this is going. So, I think Camilla has a third option up her sleeve that we the audience haven't been clued in on yet. The results of her gambit.


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