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Breaking Providence Ch. 58 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-03-07 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Kaijucifer

I personally would prefer the Dark Lord job to be used as a way to undo the loop, it would be better in that, often what is perceived as evil by the majority can be misunderstood. For there can be no light without darkness, life cannot exist without death, creation cannot happen without destruction. The dark lord power could be used to wipe the slate clean by finally having the Dark Lord win in the end, destroying the root cause of this. A good way to turn the concept on its head. Sure, your explanation of the merging "breaking the chain" works, but I like this idea more. "Good and evil are necessary, and one and the same, if one side tips the balance for too long, all will fall" and the machine could have added it in as a hidden stipulation to deter greed and lust for power- by having a single-minded focus such as having "good triumph over perceived evil always" being less and less productive after every generation as they fail to learn that lesson - until Marcus is there to force it in. Embracing the Unity and Duality simultaneously creating a true paradise without strings attached. But that's just what I was thinking and why I would have wanted the Dark Lord power instead. That said, gonna need a sequel story, b0ss!

SpectralTime

Oh, Angelica... even when you wanna reward you gotta make it a punishment. Seriously, though, still the best girl. Ironic, that nothing the Church could possibly have done (well, except that Divine Justice stunt I guess) has self-sabotaged harder than simply providing Marcus with an unshakable, bottomless source of moral wisdom like her. ...I do kind of wish Beth had somehow been involved though. Just because, at this point, she's practically as much a part of the family as the rest of them, and she'd be no less worried after seeing Marcus eat an arrow to the heart. Maybe there'll be an offscreen fond farewell before the final story arc, and maybe she'll be around for the probably-happy ending.

Kyo Amamoto

from what i heard it's good just all the activist bs around jkr has soured me on all bu fanfics for "the wizarding world" setting.

Kyo Amamoto

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Cambrian

Hogwarts Legacy is the main one. Didn't wanna start it while still writing BP and also wanted to make sure it was worth buying first

DJ Johnson

I'm curious now what games you got on the back burner?

Cambrian

Maybe! There will definitely be a break like there was between MNL and BL and the start of this story, but I have some ideas. Think first I'm gonna catch up on some games, see if I get any story ideas from them, and if not, go back to some other story ideas I had

DJ Johnson

So what are you gonna write to fill it's place gonna give us another story? ;o

Cambrian

I did originally say 70 chapters, but there was a chapter in the last 20 that didn't deserve to be a chapter, so it got cut from the outline

Cambrian

I originally intended to do non-canon omakes instead of after stories, but I'm no longer as enthusiastic about those omakes as I was originally was. Still might do them eventually. That said, the reason there won't be after stories is because I'm probably going to write a sequel down the road at some point

Cambrian

The Shadow's identity gets revealed by the end of this final arc dun worry~

Cambrian

I'm setting up a lot for a Book 2, I just don't know when I'll write it. Might be some time before I sit down and get the outline to the sequel ready. It definitely won't be immediate

SpiritCrystal

Pleasepleaseplease!

SylverIron

Thought you said 70 chapters... eh, probably an epilogue or you managed to shorten the number down.

DJ Johnson

Are we gonna get any after stories is it done just like that?! D:

TheSinful

Huh. 11 chapters left and we don't know exactly who Shadow is nor has Marcus plowed the Elf Milf. Angelina: (Gives impassioned speech about a better tomorrow for everyone) Also Angelina: "I REALLY want to suck your cock right now."

Kyo Amamoto

final chapter of the first volume i hope. ngl i can see this becoming a whole series of fics.


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