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Breaking Providence Ch. 61 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-03-13 23:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Keeper

Clearly you know what one of the "What if/extended erotic" scenes has to be ;)

Voivode

I don't suppose we could get a one shot of how Caleb and Gral-Ra managed to bury the hatchet after this is concluded?

RanmaChaos

A fantastic chapter! Well done!

SpectralTime

And yes, it is intrinsically funny seeing his growing horror and at seeing his two sort of parents flirting right in front of him, enough that I won’t complain about how it should probably hit different emotionally for an orphan or something.

SpectralTime

I appreciate most the suggestion that, since both jobs seem to be amalgamations of everyone who previously held them, that most of the previous destined heroes were decent people who cared about doing the right thing more than doing what they were told. It’s a more complicated lesson that sometimes perfectly good, decent people can still be pawns of something intrinsically wrong and abusive, but therefore in my mind the more important one for a mature audience. And I think this gets that lesson across better than just making the destined hero job a self righteous asshole.

Thunder

You know what would be as hilarious as it is unlikely? If as a result of all of this, Lisanna accidentally gets her wish. Like, permanently shutting down the DLvDH Doctrine causes the High Elves to forcibly descend from the Higher Plane. Probably won't be the case because so far we've seen no reason why it would. But if it did, I'd give it 50/38/12% that she'd bolt straight for Orc territory, beg for Marcus to claim her, or just go into seclusion away from the other elves.

Thunder

Being predictable isn't a bad thing when it comes to stories. Just means that there is a logic at play. Being predictable poorly, though, is a sin.

SylverIron

Yes, "combining" *definitely* is a convenient term...

Cambrian

glad you liked it, and excited for more too!

Cambrian

glad to hear it :P

Cambrian

Luckily they didn't get that far fufufu

Cambrian

yus

Cambrian

lmao poor Marcus

SpiritCrystal

I voted for dark hero! This vote was rigged! I demand a recount!! Lul that was a pretty good soul world chapter while keeping to your style cam, can’t wait for more!

Kyo Amamoto

people can recognize tropes cam. doesn't lessen the story for using them.

SylverIron

So Marcus' pain wasn't physical..but knowing he's about to watch someone wearing his parents' skin fuck...

Smile Dip

Good to know Camilla is so op she can 1v3 the Destined Lord's party, plus another Dark General. Also, her bondage game is probably incredible.

William Wu-Zhen

*Marcus, watching as personifications of the Dark Lord and Destined Hero, dressed as his parents, about to fuck*: “Oh god make them stop.”


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