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Breaking Providence Ch. 65 (Original)

🕑 Added 2023-03-22 23:00:03 +0000 UTC

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TouchtheSky

Serafina is about to have a full mental breakdown I suspect. The discovery that 1) the man she loved didn’t tell her about any of this 2) probably died unnecessarily3) all that she sacrificed was in vain 4) all the moral compromises she justified to herself were in vain, are all probably going to really take a toll on her mentally. I expect full tilt ugly crying and/or anhedonic depression mixed with crippling despair to be her initial reaction to the truth. Poor Serafina. She was originally a relatively good person trying to do the right thing with deeply, fatally flawed information about the situation, made worse by her pain and trauma from losing Caleb making her much more callous and willing to say that the ends justify the means. I kinda expect the next chapter to not even have any lewdity at all with how hard this should hit her.

Thunder

I guess... Perhaps it's just me, but it feels like it's missing a certain amount of narrative satisfaction.

SpiritCrystal

…other countries chose other doctrines?

Zarroc789

Very curious how Serafina will react to the combined jobs.

Cambrian

I think it's definitely fair to say Marcus isn't directly important to the Elsenthia Plotline in the back half of this story, but his indirect impact is massive. If he didn't exist, if he wasn't a part of things, then nothing would have happened the way it happened. Elsenthia certainly wouldn't have had Volupa's help in overthrowing her mother and Serafina, for instance.

Cambrian

Heh, fair, got a bit too into the plot didn't I? xD

Thunder

It's certainly an odd resolution. Marcus kinda feels... incidental to the story? Like, it feels like the story wouldn't have changed that much if he'd not been part of it at all, and the story had focused more on Elsenthia. Especially with the discovery that the machine that created the Doctrine was already broken.

Thunder

Would've liked to see a little more of this "depravity" that she's been waiting for. Ah well.

DJ Johnson

Eh was expecting more with the sex scene seeing how this was built up for so long other then that great chapter!


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