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A Savage Nature Ch. 21 (Warcraft Insert)

🕑 Added 2023-05-08 22:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Cambrian

good catch thanks, fixed!

xydra22

"Demon invested" should be "demon infested"

Cambrian

Good catch thanks! Fixt now. And glad you're enjoying it so much~

Void Walker

"She could scarcely believe what Illidan had come" forgive me but is this Become* for this part? or something else? and Fantastic work yet again! i cant wait to see what happens next!

Thunder

I kinda suspect that, out of everyone, Illidan's path would change the least, even with the death of Malfurion. 10,000 years of nothing but stewing and withdrawal is not an easy thing to overcome, especially when one doesn't want to overcome it.

LordMarksman

Yeah this is better and you are right that I did read old version in my email. Granted I couldn't help but wince seeing how Illdrian got instantly turned down and friendzoned. 10,000 years locked up, brother dead, and still brutally shut down. Well at least there are still plenty of enemies to work out all that aggression from his rejection. Besides he'd still want to avenge his brother regardless even if Tyrande did turn him down.

Cambrian

Not sure if you're talking about the old version or the new version tbh. You might have only written the old version of the chapter via email, make sure to check out the new edited version where the kiss has been taken out!

Cambrian

Glad to hear it!

Cambrian

Glad to hear it!

Cambrian

You might have only read the old version of the chapter via email, make sure to check out the new edited version where the kiss has been taken out!

Cambrian

You might have only read the old version of the chapter via email, make sure to check out the new edited version where the kiss has been taken out!

LordMarksman

I don't know much of WoW, but I feel it was too fast too soon. I don't doubt Illdrian would do something like this from what I read of him but I think he might try something like this after a few battles. Right now I think he'd actually grieve for his brother and want revenge first. For all the problems Illdrian and Malfurian had with each other Illdrian did care and love his brother. He also as others said respected Tyrande's choice, he had opportunity to kidnap her once for his own yet instead chose to return her safely to Malfurian. Also Malfurian did visit him several times, considering he has been stuck in prison for 10,000 years with everybody else hating him. That does indeed mean something, even if Malfurian's efforts failed to convince his brother. I do think Illdrian a part of him at least, appreciated his brother showing up to talk to him. Even if they did probably just end up stubbornly arguing with each other. Plus Malfurian's sorta death just happened, he would have given Tyrande at least some time to grieve before making a move. For now, Illdrian probably be focused on avenging his brother and ripping out various demons spines out in his fury. Anyway rather than kiss, I sort of feel he'd go for hug and grieve with her. Sure Illdrian may be kind of obsessed with Tyrande, but he truly does love her and isn't the type to force himself on her. Because he wants her to accept him and love him back not just own her.

I think Illidan was fine. Yes the kiss may have been too much too quick but he has been in prison with Maiev for 10 millennia. Maybe have him calm down and realise it was a mistake. He was obsessed but he has never been an idiot.

Durrandon

I like the edited version much better. It is far more subtle and the only reason it was instantly caught by Tyrande is because she knows him so well. The change respects Illidan’s intrigue abilities while allowing for a plausible reason why it doesn’t work (their long history between them).

Faury Vincent

I think you did Illidan dirty. He is a war criminal, a traitor and a tyrant. But I always felt that he respected Tyrande's choice. That Tyrande choosing Malfurion meant Illidan was not good enough yet. I didn't read the War of the Ancients books, but that's what I felt from Warcraft 3 and Legion

T4ndoris

Edited version work better imo, illidan is still creepy sounding tho (i guess that's what 10 000 years of friendzone does to you)

Gromweld

Yup, new version works!

Cambrian

The kiss is gone now, so when you have a moment please re-read the chapter for me and see what you think of the edited version! Would love to hear your new reaction!

Gromweld

To echo the others: he likely wouldn't go for the kiss, it's too soon and at this point he still does care for Malfurion and would be legitimately grieving. If you still want him to run off, you could just have him get angry about how they're wasting time (there are still other prisoners they need to free) and just bolts off to go fight demons and undead himself as a way of coping.

TheSinful

Yeah, works better.

Cambrian

Glad to hear it, means a lot =)

Josh

Love this story btw. Just sayin


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